Feedback: Editor's Draft Section 1.4, minor editorial fixes

Hello,

I wasn't sure if the editor's draft was back in a Wiki.  Minor changes suggested to section 1.4.

Current:
1.4 Relation to general software design guidelines and other specifications



One the goals of the authors of this document is to ensure that the requirements are compatible with other good software design practices. However, this document does not purport to be a complete guide to good software design. For instance, the general topic of user interface design for computer software exceeds the scope of this document, though some user interface requirements have been included because of their importance to accessibility.



Proposed:

Remove a couple uses of good and change the goals part to indicate the goal of the document, not the author.


One of the goals of this document is to ensure that the requirements are compatible with other software design practices. However, this document does not purport to be a complete guide to good software design. For instance, the general topic of user interface design for computer software exceeds the scope of this document, though some user interface requirements have been included because of their importance to accessibility.

Kelly

Received on Thursday, 6 March 2008 16:01:06 UTC