- From: Richard Ishida <ishida@w3.org>
- Date: Tue, 24 Sep 2002 17:25:22 +0100
- To: <w3c-wai-ua@w3.org>
- Cc: "Richard Ishida" <ishida@w3.org>
Please find enclosed some personal last call comments on the User Agent Accessibility Guidelines 1.0 Version reviewed was 21 August 2002 I18n WG comments will follow. #ri-1: Sec 2, 1st bulleted list It would be useful to clarify the intent and normative status of the bold text that immediately follows a guideline title. #ri-2: Checkpoint 1.1, checkpoint provisions for this and all following checkpoints Consider naming the checkpoint provisions 1.1.1 or 1.1.a and so on, so they can be easily referred to directly. #ri-3: Checkpoint 1.1, last para Shouldn't this para have some more formal status (perhaps within normative inclusions and exclusions)? #ri-4: Checkpoint 2.2, Sufficient technique 1 Suggest: 'text format, not just implemented" -> "text format, in addition to implemented" By the way, note that the numbering in the document is a little confusing. Eg. there appear at first glance to be two sections labelled 1.1. Hope that helps, Richard. ============ Richard Ishida W3C The W3C Internationalization Activity has restructured, and has issued a call for participation. See http://www.w3.org/International/about.html tel: +44 1753 480 292 http://www.w3.org/International/
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