- From: Ian Jacobs <ij@w3.org>
- Date: Mon, 28 Feb 2000 10:31:30 -0500
- To: Susan Lesch <susan@textet.com>
- CC: w3c-wai-ua@w3.org
Susan Lesch wrote: > > These are a few ideas for very minor typographical improvements to > your User Agent Accessibility Guidelines 1.0 [1] Candidate > Recommendation ("work in progress"). If they come too late, or are of > no use to you, please ignore them. Comments on the Techniques > Document are on their way separately. Thank you Susan, All the changes will be incorporated into the next revision. - Ian > There are about six or seven references to HTML 4.0 that could be > changed to HTML 4.01 or HTML 4. > > From here on, items are identified by section and paragraph or list > item number. A quote follows, and then an idea for improvement. > Comments are in brackets []. > > 1.2 Ensure that the user interface is accessible - par. 1 and par. 3 > the the [twice] > the > > 1.2 Ensure that the user interface is accessible - par. 3 item 1 > (e.g,. > (e.g., > > 1.2 Help orient the user - list item 1 > etc., > etc. > > 1.7 Validity of a claim - par. 3 > Claimants are expected modify or retract > Claimants are expected to modify or retract > > 1.7 Checkpoint applicability - second to last item > (e.g,. > (e.g., > > 2. Guideline 2 - par. 2 > "...User agents should allow users to specify whether primary > content should be rendered, equivalent alternatives, or both." > [Not sure here but this could read something like:] > User agents should allow users to specify whether primary > content should be rendered, output as an equivalent alternative, > or both. > > 2. Guideline 5 - list item 5 > audio cues (users > audio cues (for users > > 3. Glossary - Recognize > etc > etc. > > 3. Glossary - Rendered content > c.f. > cf. > > Checklists: > > In the Checklists [2,3], in the opening section for "This version," > "postscript" could read "PostScript" and "pdf" could read "PDF". > > There is one outdated reference to HTML 4.0 in the last Priority 2 > checkpoint. This could be changed to HTML 4.01 or HTML 4. > > References: > [1] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/CR-UAAG10-20000128/ > [2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/CR-UAAG10-20000128/uaag10-chktable > [3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2000/CR-UAAG10-20000128/uaag10-chklist.html > > Thanks for your time, and best wishes for your project, > -- > Susan Lesch > susan@textet.com -- Ian Jacobs (jacobs@w3.org) http://www.w3.org/People/Jacobs Tel/Fax: +1 212 684-1814 or 212 532-4767 Cell: +1 917 450-8783
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