Re: some comments on text version of aug 9 guidelines draft

To Make it more smooth?
<to choose whether(or not) to be notified...? 
Thanks!
Ian Jacobs wrote:
<snipped>
> 
> Here's another attempt at revised checkpoint 10.3 text:
> 
>   Allow the user to selectively turn on and off notification
>   of common types of document and view changes.
> 
> [I hate to split the infinitive with the adverb, but it fits
>  best between "to" and "turn"]
> 
> Then after the checkpoint:
> 
>   For example, to choose to be notified (or not) that a
>   script has been executed, that a new window has been opened,
>   that a pulldown menu has been opened, that a new frame
>   has received focus, etc.
<snipped>
>  - Ian
> 
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