- From: Lisa Seeman <lisa1seeman@gmail.com>
- Date: Mon, 17 Jun 2024 19:36:12 +0300
- To: Chuck Adams <charles.adams@oracle.com>
- Cc: "WCAG list (w3c-wai-gl@w3.org)" <w3c-wai-gl@w3.org>, Mary Jo Mueller <maryjom@us.ibm.com>
- Message-ID: <CAKExBMK363OM0XmmXp+wOFL6oWq=Udugg_02Wp9e2hdnXc70Ew@mail.gmail.com>
From a COGA perspective the wording looks much better. I will try to give it a careful read tomorrow. Thanks for all the hard work Lisa On Sat, Jun 15, 2024 at 1:05 AM Chuck Adams <charles.adams@oracle.com> wrote: > Hi AGWG members, > > > > The purpose of this email is to request your review of the latest changes > to WCAG2ICT. A few weeks ago the WCAG2ICT Task Force introduced the First > Public Working Draft of the updated WCAG2ICT document, and since that time > the Task Force has been reviewing and approving any suggestions and > substantive changes to the document. > > > > We believe that we have implemented all AGWG member changes, and request > your additional review of the following: > > > > - Pull request #378 > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files__;!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8fI3LSgag$> > - Draft WCAG2ICT from PR 378 > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/__;!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8eSz-LBsw$> > that has all changes in it > > > > We are having some challenges using DIFF. As such, we are highlighting > the following specific changes to make member review easier: > > > > - Introduction sub-sections: Detailed changes in introduction.md > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-f90b081e513dea80603790c785f691eddd100e03687bf921e64190f99c315d9e__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8dJ-IeaBw$> > - Guidance in this document section > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*guidance-in-this-document__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8duiEcDpQ$> > – added better language to address referencing COGA’s *Making > Content Usable for People with Cognitive and Learning Disabilities* (Issue > 77) > - Comparison with the 2013 WCAG2ICT Note > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*comparison-with-the-2013-wcag2ict-note__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8f1g8bvYA$> > section – added list of new key terms added by WCAG2ICT, and edited text in > “Updated sections” > - Key term definitions: Detailed changes in key-terms.md file > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-9ce8dc60ecf3a9e0fb9483e1c0e5b0e1be662ff8a56a0e2f7c6ec418d01a9a35__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8e3Td1Ckg$> > - Updated “closed functionality > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*closed-functionality__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8dc-my_Iw$>” > to add last paragraph plus some editorial changes > - Added “platform software > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*platform-software__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8eTd-r_3A$> > ” > - Added “virtual keyboard > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*virtual-keyboard__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8cTWLmH_A$> > ” > - Editorial: We added links to these definitions, as appropriate, > throughout the document. > - Comments on Closed Functionality > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*comments-on-closed-functionality__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8fMwIk3pw$> > section: See the detailed changes in closed-functionality.md > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-af54b47fdce0aba9da3dcf53808378a143fa157f53e948923ef91ca0f688413b__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8fFjMg_5w$> > - Added last statement in the note, moved from the key term “closed > functionality” > - Added same paragraph added to key term “closed functionality” > (last paragraph) > - Comments by Guideline and Success Criterion: Detailed changes in > comments-by-guideline-and-success-criterion.md > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-aaf85433dfae195a104deedc26b2cd96ac2eda372b8c521c8d055ed477278ef4__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8cabBVQ-w$> > - 1.4.10 Reflow > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*applying-sc-1-4-10-reflow-to-non-web-documents-and-software__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8diB_8djw$> > – Updated Notes 5 and 7 per Issue 377, and Note 8 (added a clarification to > the last sentence) > - 2.1.1 Keyboard > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*applying-sc-2-1-1-keyboard-to-non-web-documents-and-software__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8cWo_UZ1A$> > – Updated Notes 1 and 2. > - 3.3.8 Accessible Authentication > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*applying-sc-3-3-8-accessible-authentication-minimum-to-non-web-documents-and-software__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8ff22bzeA$> > – Added Note 4. > - Comments on Definitions: Detailed changes in > comments-on-definitions-in-wcag-1.1-glossary-in-appendix-a.md > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-d97c4e69cc6b3fc8133a50416ebf94844c485cec94f05fcc7afe153703b4a636__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8dvf3t4BA$> > - Keyboard interface > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*applying-sc-2-1-1-keyboard-to-non-web-documents-and-software__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8cWo_UZ1A$> > – Notes 1 and 2 copied from exact text we updated in the Comments by > Guideline and Success Criterion section. > - Other changes are editorial. > - Success Criteria Problematic for Closed Functionality > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*success-criteria-problematic-for-closed-functionality__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8e6WaDtzg$> > section: See the detailed changes in > success-criteria-problematic-for-closed-functionality.md > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/w3c/wcag2ict/pull/378/files*diff-5bb53cdb6059a8faa171cadd10bcb2fe87be086151a95ccadc166d3baac3a25d__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8eliHBbEg$> > > > > The changes were to the guidance for the following SC in this section: > > - 1.3.4 Orientation > - 1.4.10 Reflow > - 2.1.1 Keyboard > - 2.4.2 Page Titled > - 3.3.1 Error Identification > > > > Other changes to this section are editorial. > > > > If you have participated in the review and made suggestions, please ensure > that we are including your name in the Acknowledgements section > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/deploy-preview-378--wcag2ict.netlify.app/*acknowledgements__;Iw!!ACWV5N9M2RV99hQ!KFeCHyANe0RIF9YOGr_OGi3gJfgJ4zTVKoPq8wfg1Ed_WGy8Ybzik3FsBv9zLwp_9AkTyGtUa8cqj_7LYg$>. > We don’t want to unintentionally leave anyone out. > > > > The intent is to go to CFC later next week. > > > > Regards, > > Charles Adams >
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