RE: WCAG 2.2 SC Do Not Rely On User Memory Draft

Hi David.

The first sentence tripped me up a bit, and I did some alterations which I would like you to review.

The first sentence:  Information needed later on in activities that require sequential input should be stored, or displayed, as the user proceeds through required tasks.

My recommendation:  Information, labels and instructions which are required to complete an activity or task must be presented to the user throughout the user's progress through the activity or task.

Also, there are some editorial recommendations I've got, but I think it would be better to suggest them in the document rather than list them here.  I've sent a request to edit.

Regards,
Charles Adams

-----Original Message-----
From: David Fazio <dfazio@helixopp.com> 
Sent: Friday, August 23, 2019 9:59 AM
To: Patrick H. Lauke <redux@splintered.co.uk>
Cc: w3c-wai-gl@w3.org
Subject: Re: WCAG 2.2 SC Do Not Rely On User Memory Draft

Yes, placeholder text is what I was referring to 

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> On Aug 23, 2019, at 8:54 AM, Patrick H. Lauke <redux@splintered.co.uk> wrote:
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>> On 23/08/2019 16:41, David Fazio wrote:
>> Good morning, everyone. Anyone interested in contributing to the proposed S.C. “Do Not Rely On User Memory” please take a look at what we have so far, comment, propose edits, and help us set it up for TPAC in the next couple of weeks. This is my very first experience working on an S.C. so any, and all, contributions are greatly appreciated.
>> : https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__docs.google.com_document_d_1e46eqQnVYqdSyqo29pyJoY1QynRH9v95YW8soTTbfsU_edit-3Fusp-3Dsharing&d=DwIGaQ&c=RoP1YumCXCgaWHvlZYR8PZh8Bv7qIrMUB65eapI_JnE&r=b-9TIC95K-nLEKIDibNXAN_FKV-iXhLlAW2Zc3ebV_c&m=2XzVcTjPT59Q0dFjU2g_Mkvtn-bWSBC5x5lnFt5z64k&s=l1rLNWpuYBU2zGrUfUmolnMr1RZQPujWM7sfJBIaf7g&e= 
> 
> Skimming over this briefly:
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> - in technique 1, it's unclear what "embossed sample text" is/means. placeholder text?
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> - "or labels placed within form fields that disappear when a user activates them" this would already be a failure of 3.3.2 Labels of Instructions
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