Re: On The Side: (was Re: CFC - Updated Response to issue 650/655/695/711 on Content on Hover or Focus)

Hi John,
hyphenation is a slight improvement but I am not yet convinced we really 
need to spell out receiving and removing, visible and hidden. But I 
won't object to the SC on these grounds.
Detlev

Am 18.01.2018 um 15:48 schrieb John Foliot:
> Just noticed that Detlev had a similar parsing concern as I. Detlev, 
> what do you think of my proposal to hyphenate the two terms?
>
> On Thu, Jan 18, 2018 at 9:47 AM, John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com 
> <mailto:john.foliot@deque.com>> wrote:
>
>     +1 with an extremely small editorial observation: I find this
>     somewhat difficult to parse, and suggest that we hyphenate two
>     'compound terms' used here.
>
>     Current:
>
>         Where receiving and removing pointer hover or keyboard focus
>         triggers additional content to become visible and hidden,
>         respectively, the following are true:
>
>     Suggested:
>
>         Where receiving and removing pointer-hoveror keyboard-focus
>         triggers additional content to become visible and hidden,
>         respectively, the following are true:
>
>     ​However, I wouldn't want this to be a blocking function, so I'm
>     good with what we have now (it's just a suggestion​...)
>
>
>     JF
>
>     On Thu, Jan 18, 2018 at 9:07 AM, Detlev Fischer (TK)
>     <detlev.fischer@testkreis.de <mailto:detlev.fischer@testkreis.de>>
>     wrote:
>
>         +1
>         Detlev
>
>         The change to "Where receiving and removing pointer hover or
>         keyboard focus triggers additional content to become
>         visibleand hidden, respectively..." strikes me as harder to
>         understand, if more precise. I prefer the previous version of
>         this initial sentence, thinking that no formulation will ever
>         snuff out chances of misconstrual. But I won't stand in the
>         way of this one...
>
>
>
>         Am 18.01.2018 um 01:08 schrieb Andrew Kirkpatrick:
>
>
>             Call For Consensus — ends Friday January 19th at 7pm
>             Boston time.
>
>             The Working Group has discussed responses to the following
>             issues:
>
>             650: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/650
>             <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/650>)
>
>             655: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/655
>             <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/655>)
>
>             695: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/695
>             <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/695>)
>
>             711: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/711
>             <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/711>)
>
>             Response to Issue 650:
>             https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#650
>             <https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#650>
>
>             Response to Issue 655:
>             https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#655
>             <https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#655>
>
>             Response to Issue 695:
>             https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#695
>             <https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#695>
>
>             Response to Issue 711:
>             https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#711
>             <https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL/wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#711>
>
>             The changes to the SC are implemented in this pull
>             request: https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/pull/739
>             <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/pull/739>
>
>             The changed SC can be viewed here:
>             http://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/hover-focus-edits/guidelines/#content-on-hover-or-focus
>             <http://rawgit.com/w3c/wcag21/hover-focus-edits/guidelines/#content-on-hover-or-focus>
>
>             If you have concerns about this proposed consensus
>             position that have not been discussed already and feel
>             that those concerns result in you “not being able to live
>             with” this decision, please let the group know before the
>             CfC deadline.
>
>             Thanks,
>
>             AWK
>
>             Andrew Kirkpatrick
>
>             Group Product Manager, Accessibility
>
>             Adobe
>
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