On The Side: (was Re: CFC - Updated Response to issue 650/655/695/711 on Content on Hover or Focus)

Just noticed that Detlev had a similar parsing concern as I. Detlev, what
do you think of my proposal to hyphenate the two terms?

On Thu, Jan 18, 2018 at 9:47 AM, John Foliot <john.foliot@deque.com> wrote:

> +1 with an extremely small editorial observation: I find this somewhat
> difficult to parse, and suggest that we hyphenate two 'compound terms' used
> here.
>
> Current:
>
> Where receiving and removing pointer hover or keyboard focus triggers
> additional content to become visible and hidden, respectively, the
> following are true:
>
> Suggested:
>
> Where receiving and removing pointer-hover or keyboard-focus triggers
> additional content to become visible and hidden, respectively, the
> following are true:
>
> ​However, I wouldn't want this to be a blocking function, so I'm good with
> what we have now (it's just a suggestion​...)
>
>
> JF
>
> On Thu, Jan 18, 2018 at 9:07 AM, Detlev Fischer (TK) <
> detlev.fischer@testkreis.de> wrote:
>
>> +1
>> Detlev
>>
>> The change to "Where receiving and removing pointer hover or keyboard
>> focus triggers additional content to become visibleand hidden,
>> respectively..." strikes me as harder to understand, if more precise. I
>> prefer the previous version of this initial sentence, thinking that no
>> formulation will ever snuff out chances of misconstrual. But I won't stand
>> in the way of this one...
>>
>>
>>
>> Am 18.01.2018 um 01:08 schrieb Andrew Kirkpatrick:
>>
>>>
>>> Call For Consensus — ends Friday January 19th at 7pm Boston time.
>>>
>>> The Working Group has discussed responses to the following issues:
>>>
>>> 650: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/650)
>>>
>>> 655: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/655)
>>>
>>> 695: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/695)
>>>
>>> 711: (https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/711)
>>>
>>> Response to Issue 650: https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL
>>> /wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#650
>>>
>>> Response to Issue 655: https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL
>>> /wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#655
>>>
>>> Response to Issue 695: https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL
>>> /wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#695
>>>
>>> Response to Issue 711: https://www.w3.org/WAI/GL
>>> /wiki/Draft_Responses_to_Dec_WD_Issues#711
>>>
>>> The changes to the SC are implemented in this pull request:
>>> https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/pull/739
>>>
>>> The changed SC can be viewed here: http://rawgit.com/w3c/wc
>>> ag21/hover-focus-edits/guidelines/#content-on-hover-or-focus
>>>
>>> If you have concerns about this proposed consensus position that have
>>> not been discussed already and feel that those concerns result in you “not
>>> being able to live with” this decision, please let the group know before
>>> the CfC deadline.
>>>
>>> Thanks,
>>>
>>> AWK
>>>
>>> Andrew Kirkpatrick
>>>
>>> Group Product Manager, Accessibility
>>>
>>> Adobe
>>>
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