Re: editorial to incorporate exception into main SC text for 1.4.13

Re: issue 609 <https://github.com/w3c/wcag21/issues/609> - can we use 
which here?


On 1/5/2018 4:17 PM, White, Jason J wrote:
>
> I think C is the most accurate. B can be read as asserting that the 
> additional content (not its appearance) is controlled by the author, 
> which is always true.
>
> *From:* Andrew Kirkpatrick [mailto:akirkpat@adobe.com]
> *Sent:* Friday, January 5, 2018 6:46 PM
> *To:* Alex Li (CELA) <alli@microsoft.com>; WCAG <w3c-wai-gl@w3.org>
> *Subject:* Re: editorial to incorporate exception into main SC text 
> for 1.4.13
>
> Thanks Alex!
>
> Other options:
>
> B: When pointer hover or keyboard focus triggers @@the@@ appearance of 
> additional content @@which@@ is @@controlled@@ by the author, the 
> following are true:
>
> C: When pointer hover or keyboard focus triggers additional content, 
> @@the@@ appearance of @@which@@ is @@controlled@@ by the author, the 
> following are true:
>
> I think that by making this an affirmative condition for author 
> involvement, we don’t need to worry about the “not controlled by the 
> UA” part. The appearance is controlled by the author or it isn’t.
>
> Thoughts?
>
> AWK
>
> Hi all,
>
> Here’s my proposal:
>
> Original SC text: “When pointer hover or keyboard focus triggers 
> additional content to become visible, the following are true:”
>
> Original exception text: “Exception: The visual presentation of the 
> additional content is controlled by the user agent and is not modified 
> by the author.”
>
> Proposed SC text: “When pointer hover or keyboard focus triggers 
> appearance of additional content that is modified by the author and 
> not controlled by the user agent, the following are true:”
>
> All best,
>
> Alex Li
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