Re: Editorial changes to SC

Hi Michael,

Generally that looks good, but I think the very last change in the list (zoom-content, line 12) changes the meaning, at least according to a comment previously.

“Content can be zoomed to an equivalent width of 320 CSS pixels without loss of content or functionality, and without requiring scrolling on more than one axis except for…”

The comment stretched my grammar knowledge, but apparently if there is no comma after ‘functionality’ it means you could have a loss of content with scrolling, but not functionality.

The content & functionality are supposed to be grouped, with the no-scrolling applying to both.

I’m happy to be corrected on that, but I think Michael Gower commented about it previously.

Cheers,

-Alastair