Re: Join editorial group for WCAG 2.1 new Understanding docs

Thank you for the input David! Norah and I will add this to the list of
items to be proposed for revision. Nice to have another set of eyes on the
documents.

Brent


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On Sat, Sep 15, 2018 at 9:53 AM David Berman <berman@davidberman.com> wrote:

> Hi.
>
> I found a few errors at the URL:
> https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG21/Understanding/non-text-contrast.html
> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.w3.org_WAI_WCAG21_Understanding_non-2Dtext-2Dcontrast.html&d=DwMFaQ&c=0YLnzTkWOdJlub_y7qAx8Q&r=v-L6X-ScaY5UKb-F-_zcuXdbPw2UYK_gaTG8R5d9h7U&m=xzjQVBMS-yvhvCoJyRP0KuOdJu9Yxku1bBPlgtrInrw&s=E7b2gcRSe2XqK22hEgplUIAvdC82M_xQnjoFZG-EOEM&e=>
>
> In this paragraph, change "controls" to "control's":
> *"The Use of Color success criteria addresses changing only the color of
> an object (or text) without otherwise altering the object's form. If a
> controls indicator of state (e.g. button background) varies only by color
> this is acceptable if the luminosity contrast ratio between the colors of
> the states differ by at least 3:1, or if there is another indicator of
> state. For example, a text link that only differs from adjacent text using
> color and there is no other visual indication that the text is linked (e.g.
> the link underline is removed) needs to ensure that the link color meets
> the 3:1 luminosity contrast ratio relative to the non-linked text color in
> order to meet the related Success Criteria 1.4.1.  "*
>
> Also throughout the document change "e.g." to "e.g.,"
>
>
> And then in this chunk that follows below, the word "New" comes across as
> very weird, what with how things are formatted around it:
>
> *"state*
> *New*
>
> *dynamic property expressing characteristics of a user interface component
> that may change in response to user action or automated processes*
>
> *States do not affect the nature of the component, but represent data
> associated with the component or user interaction possibilities. Examples
> include focus, hover, select, press, check, visited/unvisited, and
> expand/collapse."*
>
>
> Regards,
> David
>
>
>
> On Wed, 6 Jun 2018 at 15:13, Sinclair, Norah M <
> norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu> wrote:
>
>> Thank you, David. That would be extremely helpful and an excellent way to
>> get started.
>>
>>
>> Regards,
>>
>> Norah
>>
>>
>> *Norah Sinclair *
>> Application and Instructional Designer, Project Manager
>>
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>> Georgia Institute of Technology
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>>
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>> ------------------------------
>> *From:* David Berman <berman@davidberman.com>
>> *Sent:* Wednesday, June 6, 2018 11:55 AM
>> *To:* Sharron Rush
>> *Cc:* w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
>> *Subject:* Re: Join editorial group for WCAG 2.1 new Understanding docs
>>
>> Hi Sharron,
>>
>> Yes, happy to. I've been going over the guidance this past week, and I've
>> found a few surface errors, as well as a couple of errors where there may
>> be unintentionally misleading statements. I'll collect them and contribute
>> them!
>>
>>
>> On Wed, 6 Jun 2018 at 11:15, Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org> wrote:
>>
>> WCAG 2.1 was officially published as a W3C Recommendation yesterday. The
>> Understanding documents are still being edited for clarity and plain
>> language. Please join Norah Sinclair who is leading the effort on the part
>> of EOWG to contribute to these important documents. See what's new in
>> WCAG 2.1
>> <https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=https-3A__www.w3.org_WAI_standards-2Dguidelines_wcag_new-2Din-2D21_&d=DwMFaQ&c=0YLnzTkWOdJlub_y7qAx8Q&r=v-L6X-ScaY5UKb-F-_zcuXdbPw2UYK_gaTG8R5d9h7U&m=xzjQVBMS-yvhvCoJyRP0KuOdJu9Yxku1bBPlgtrInrw&s=UDArClTs8kh5QUDaR7bnLr-k1i2DC6D2cVbhITU8zqs&e=>
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>>
>> Thank you,
>> Sharron, Brent, and Shawn
>>
>>
>>
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