Re: Join editorial group for WCAG 2.1 new Understanding docs

Hi.

I found a few errors at the URL:
https://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG21/Understanding/non-text-contrast.html

In this paragraph, change "controls" to "control's":
*"The Use of Color success criteria addresses changing only the color of an
object (or text) without otherwise altering the object's form. If a
controls indicator of state (e.g. button background) varies only by color
this is acceptable if the luminosity contrast ratio between the colors of
the states differ by at least 3:1, or if there is another indicator of
state. For example, a text link that only differs from adjacent text using
color and there is no other visual indication that the text is linked (e.g.
the link underline is removed) needs to ensure that the link color meets
the 3:1 luminosity contrast ratio relative to the non-linked text color in
order to meet the related Success Criteria 1.4.1.  "*

Also throughout the document change "e.g." to "e.g.,"


And then in this chunk that follows below, the word "New" comes across as
very weird, what with how things are formatted around it:

*"state*
*New*

*dynamic property expressing characteristics of a user interface component
that may change in response to user action or automated processes*

*States do not affect the nature of the component, but represent data
associated with the component or user interaction possibilities. Examples
include focus, hover, select, press, check, visited/unvisited, and
expand/collapse."*


Regards,
David



On Wed, 6 Jun 2018 at 15:13, Sinclair, Norah M <
norah.sinclair@amac.gatech.edu> wrote:

> Thank you, David. That would be extremely helpful and an excellent way to
> get started.
>
>
> Regards,
>
> Norah
>
>
> *Norah Sinclair *
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> *To:* Sharron Rush
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> *Subject:* Re: Join editorial group for WCAG 2.1 new Understanding docs
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> Hi Sharron,
>
> Yes, happy to. I've been going over the guidance this past week, and I've
> found a few surface errors, as well as a couple of errors where there may
> be unintentionally misleading statements. I'll collect them and contribute
> them!
>
>
> On Wed, 6 Jun 2018 at 11:15, Sharron Rush <srush@knowbility.org> wrote:
>
> WCAG 2.1 was officially published as a W3C Recommendation yesterday. The
> Understanding documents are still being edited for clarity and plain
> language. Please join Norah Sinclair who is leading the effort on the part
> of EOWG to contribute to these important documents. See what's new in
> WCAG 2.1 <https://www.w3.org/WAI/standards-guidelines/wcag/new-in-21/>
>
> Reply to this email if you are interested in contributing. You will be
> added to the small group who meet weekly to review and consolidate comments
> as part of their active EO commitment.
>
> Thank you,
> Sharron, Brent, and Shawn
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