RE: updated: Business Case slides

Shawn,

Other than the feedback I've already given re: Slide #4 and the claims
regarding Legal & General, I think the presentation has come a long way.
Provided that the presenter thoroughly reads and understands the notes, they
should be able to give an effective presentation.

Karl



> -----Original Message-----
> From: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org]
> On Behalf Of Shawn Henry
> Sent: Monday, July 25, 2011 2:47 PM
> To: EOWG (E-mail)
> Subject: updated: Business Case slides
> 
>   EOWG,
> 
> Based on the EOWG discussion on 22 July, I edited the [broad view of
> accessibility] slide (5), changing the slide a bit and the Notes
significantly.
> After further input and thought, I was able to separate out the issues
more
> clearly. Currently the purpose of that slide is introduce the first part
of the
> presentation, not to have a compelling quote. So I've tried another
revision
> to better meet the purpose and get rid of the quote issues. I look forward
to
> your comments on how these work or might be further revised.
> 
> The two drafts are available for review:
> * 25 July revision removing quotation aspects:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/presentations/bcase/bcase-presentation-format-
> 2011-07July-25.ppt
> * 23 July version with changes based on the 22 July EOWG decisions:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/presentations/bcase/bcase-presentation-format-
> 2011-07July-23.ppt
> 
> Note that the latest version (which currently is the same as the 25 July
one,
> but could change) will be at:
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/presentations/bcase/bcase-presentation-
> format.ppt
> 
> Thanks,
> ~Shawn (with editor hat on)
>

Received on Monday, 25 July 2011 22:24:32 UTC