- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Wed, 31 Mar 2010 12:45:27 -0500
- To: Ian Pouncey <w3c@ipouncey.co.uk>, w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
Thanks for the comments, Ian. Replies below. Ian Pouncey wrote: > In my last read through noticed a couple of things, which are minor > enough that I hadn't noticed them before. > > * There is a sentence saying 'Speaker: "How many people make their > websites fully accessible? Please raise your hand... About half raised > their hand."' and early in the document another saying 'your audience > might not be ... move well or at all'. The showing of hands is a > common practice in presentations. Do we need to provide some > information on how to poll the audience in an inclusive and accessible > way? Ah, right. [Shawn thinks about it...] After some thought, I think that issue is not significant enough to warrant adding to this document. (We have a catch-all item "Consider activities. Remember accessibility issues with any participant activities (arranging sticky notes, small group projects, etc.)." EOWG: Other perspectives? > * Minor editorial point: missing word 'as' between 'such' and 'a' > in the sentence 'Avoid distracting background, such a bright sunlight > or flashing light.', and should that either be 'Avoid using a > distracting background' or 'Avoid distracting backgrounds'? Fixed to: Avoid distracting backgrounds, such as bright sunlight or flashing light. Thanks, ~Shawn > It is in good shape for publishing as it is for review. > > Regards, > Ian. > > On Sat, Mar 27, 2010 at 1:28 AM, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> wrote: >> EOWG, >> >> How to Make Presentations Accessible to All is updated online at: >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/training/accessible.php >> >> Please let me know *by Wednesday 31 March* if you approve publishing it as a >> draft for review[1], have comments, or if you would like more time to review >> it. >> >> Remember to send comments to the appropriate mailing list: >> - EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org> for significant issues and things that need >> discussion >> - EOWG editors <wai-eo-editors@w3.org> for minor editorial comments that >> don't need discussion >> >> The Analysis with scope, etc.; links to previous drafts and EOWG minutes; >> and a list of changes made today is under: >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible >> >> Thanks, >> ~Shawn >> >> [1] Example announcement of a draft-for-review publication: >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/highlights/archive#x20100106a >> >> >> >> >> -------- Original Message -------- >> Subject: For Review: Making Presentations Accessible [Rough Draft] - due 22 >> March >> Date: Fri, 12 Mar 2010 19:16:31 -0600 >> From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> >> To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org> >> CC: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org> >> >> EOWG, >> >> I have updated the analysis/requirements (including scope) and the draft >> document based on our EOWG teleconference discussion today. >> * Analysis with scope, etc. is at: >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible >> * Latest draft is at: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/training/access_pres >> >> Please review both of these for content, and the document for high-level >> issues. (It is still rough so no need to comment on the detailed copyediting >> level yet.) Make sure to refresh with your browser to get the latest >> version. >> >> Here are some questions for your review and comment via e-mail: >> * Is anything missing? Are their areas where we want to provide more >> specific or detailed guidance? (Keep in mind the limited scope and desire to >> keep it short.) >> * Should anything be cut out to simplify and shorten the document? >> * What do you think about the terminology options: Presentations, Talks, >> Meetings, Training, Sessions? (Note what is included in the scope and what >> is out of scope, at >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#accessible ) >> * What about the title? Should we have a short title with only one term, and >> then in the first sentence clarify that it applies to different situations, >> using more of the terms? See title ideas at >> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-training#title2 >> * What do you think about each editorial question throughout the draft >> document? They are highlighted green and surrounded by: [@@ question ?] >> >> Please send comments to the EOWG list: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org >> (If you are compelled to send copyedits or other things that don't need EOWG >> consideration, send them to the EO editors' list: wai-eo-editors@w3.org ) >> >> When sending comments, please include the date and time of the document that >> your comments apply to. It is at the top after "Editor's Draft" in the >> format: $Date: 2010/03/12 13:23:59 $ >> >> Please send your comments in e-mail *by Monday 22 March*. >> >> Regards, >> ~Shawn >> >> >> >> ----- >> Shawn Lawton Henry >> W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) >> e-mail: shawn@w3.org >> phone: +1.617.395.7664 >> about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/ >> >> > > >
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