Re: Completed draft Accessibility page for new W3C website

Hello Shawn and all,
I'm just reading the latest draft from september 4, 2009 and find it 
very clear.
In the section h3 "transcripts for podcasss" you mention that there are 
services that create html formats of podcasts and audio files. I did not 
know of those services and I suppose that people who are new to 
accessibility and do not know how to make their audio files and podcasts 
accessible would like to learn more about this. Do you think it would be 
possible to provide more details on this or to tell the reader where to 
find more info about that topic?
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In section "how", just after the link to "introduction to Web 
accessibility", I suppose that a verb is missing in the sentence: "Some 
accessibility barriers more complicated to avoid and the solutions take 
more development time and effort."
Do you mean: "Some accessibility barriers [ARE] more complicated to 
avoid and the solutions take more development time and effort."?
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In learn more, first sentence, something is missing:
"WAI provides a wide range of resources on different aspects web 
accessibility standards, education, implementation, and policy, including:"
I would write ":" after aspects or add a word "such", for example.
"WAI provides a wide range of resources on different aspects: web 
accessibility standards, education, implementation, and policy, 
including:" or:
"WAI provides a wide range of resources on different aspects [like, such 
as] web accessibility standards, education, implementation, and policy, 
including:" or:
"WAI provides a wide range of resources on different aspects that are 
web accessibility standards, education, implementation, and policy, 
including:".
That's all for my coments, it's a good page.
Best
Sylvie

Sylvie Duchateau
Association BrailleNet
Tél.: +33(0] 1 44 27 26 25 Fax : +33 (0) 1 44 27 34 49
Web : http://www.accessiweb.org



Shawn Henry a écrit :
> EOWG & WAI folks,
>
> The latest (maybe final!) iteration is now at: 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/4betaW3org/accessibility-new-w3c>
>
> Please read today's EOWG minutes at: 
> <http://www.w3.org/2009/09/04-eo-minutes#item01>
>
> Some alternative wordings for the introduction are in the Analysis & 
> changelog at: 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-2009-w3c-site-redesign#notes4sept> 
>
>
> Reminder:
> * The latest draft will always be at 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/4betaW3org/accessibility-new-w3c>. 
> Refresh to ensure you've got the latest version.
> * When you send comments on a specific version, please include the 
> date and time stamp that's near the <h1>, e.g., $Date: 2009/08/29 
> 19:54:32 $
> * Previous versions are linked from the Analysis and changelog page 
> under 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-2009-w3c-site-redesign#refs>
>
> Please *send any comments by Wednesday 9 Sept* if possible. We will 
> not discuss it again in EOWG unless there are open issues.
>
> Thanks,
> ~Shawn
>
>
>
>
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: update: Accessibility page for beta.w3.org
> Date: Sat, 29 Aug 2009 15:08:10 -0500
> From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
> References: <4A8B287F.7040100@w3.org>
>
> EOWG,
>
> Thanks for all the good discussion in the teleconferences and on the 
> list! In the end we'll have a great page no matter how it turns out. 
> It looks like we have until at least the middle of September until we 
> need something for the W3C redesign rollout.
>
> There are still several points to be worked through, including issues 
> brought up in e-mail and in [brackets] is the latest draft. Please 
> continue to send comments to the list so we can get it worked out in 
> time.
>
> I'll be mostly offline until Thursday 2 September, and thus not 
> responding to e-mail.
>
> Note that the latest draft will always be at 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/4betaW3org/accessibility-new-w3c>
> If you want to reference a specific version with your comments, either:
> - include the date stamp that's near the <h1>, e.g., $Date: 2009/08/29 
> 19:54:32 $
> - or, use the URI with the date at the end, e.g., 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/4betaW3org/accessibility-new-w3c20090829
>
> Previous versions are linked from the Analysis and changelog page 
> under 
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-2009-w3c-site-redesign#refs>
>
> Best,
> ~Shawn
>
>
> -------- Original Message --------
> Subject: Accessibility page for beta.w3.org
> Date: Tue, 18 Aug 2009 17:17:35 -0500
> From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
> To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
>
> EOWG,
>
> New rough concept drafts of the Accessibility page for beta.w3.org are 
> now available. *These are rough, unapproved ideas for discussion*. 
> Please focus on overall issues (not detailed "wordsmithing") and 
> realize these are individuals' ideas that are no where near agreement 
> or completion.
>
> Please use the Analysis and Changelog page as your main page for this 
> work. It is: 
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-2009-w3c-site-redesign
>
> * See that the goals and audiences are different from most of the WAI 
> pages.
>
> * The first link is to the Accessibility page - latest version.
>
> * Right under there are links to examples HTML & CSS, 
> Internationalization. Skimming through those you can see the type of 
> information we might want to cover. Also note that much of the wrapper 
> is a template defined by the W3C website redesign.
>
> * Previous drafts, links to minutes, email threads, and such are under 
> "References and version notes".
> ...
>
>
>
> -----
> Shawn Lawton Henry
> W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
> e-mail: shawn@w3.org
> phone: +1.617.395.7664
> about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
>
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