Re: Comments on "instructions for the coponents ..."

Hello Sylvie,

Thank you very much for sending comments to the list today.

To clarify:
* The "Tutorial format for web browsers - designed for self-study" displays each topic in its own page and readers step through pages/topics in the tutorial, that is, each topic in its own page. (However, this functionality requires JavaScript.)
* The "Web format (HTML/CSS) for presentations - compatible with HTML Slidy and S5 slide formats." is a single HTML file formatted so that presenters can use an HTML slide setup and only limited information will be displayed, with the rest of the information in Notes that are not displayed.

I guess we need to explain that better in the page. We can discuss this more in the teleconference.

About your comment: "In the sections "advice for presenters" and "permission and reference", I wonder if it would be useful to copy and paste the sections from the WAI presentations page" in order to let the reader have an imediate access to the content of these sections instead of clicking the links you give." -- this is related to a broader issue. To help keep the topics clear, please reply to the email message sent 24 June with subject "WAI slides instructions", which is archived at http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2009AprJun/0121.html

Thanks!
~Shawn


Sylvie duchateau wrote:
> Hello Shawn and all,
> I thinked I missed the teleconferences where you decided to include the 
> term "tutorial" in the page:
> "Instructions for the Components of Web Accessibility Presentation" at:
> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/presentations/components/>
> When (re)reading the page, I think there should be a heading 
> "introduction" or "how to understand this document", or anything else to 
> introduce the part that explains which documents are described on this 
> page.
> While reading this section, it is not clear to me what is the difference 
> between the pages:
> "• [Draft] Tutorial format for web browsers (updated @@ 2009) - designed 
> for self-study", which is in HTML and the page:
> "[Draft] Web format (HTML/CSS) for presentations (updated @@ 2009) - 
> compatible with HTML Slidy and S5 slide formats."
> For those who do not know slidy and S5, it may be useful to explain what 
> the difference is.
> In the sections "advice for presenters" and "permission and reference", 
> I wonder if it would be useful to copy and paste the sections from the 
> WAI presentations page" in order to let the reader have an imediate 
> access to the content of these sections instead of clicking the links 
> you give.
> Best
> Sylvie
> Shawn Henry a écrit :
>> EOWG,
>>
>> "Components of Web Accessibility" Presentation and Tutorial material 
>> has been updated at:
>> 1. instructions overview page 
>> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/presentations/components/>
>> 2. Tutorial format for web browsers 
>> <http://www.w3.org/Talks/wai-components/all.htm>
>> 3. Web format (HTML/CSS) for presentations 
>> <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/slides/components.html>
>>
>> Please review these and send comments to the EOWG mailing list, or to 
>> Shawn@w3.org
>>
>> This is on the EOWG agenda for this week, 17 July, so please review it 
>> before the teleconference.
>>
>> OPEN: We need someone to make a PowerPoint version.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> ~Shawn
>>
>>
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>> W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
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