RE: EOWG for Wednesday 13 May: Support publishing the business case & update availability

Hi Shawn, and All,
I read through the document draft and it is clear to me.  I agree with the comment about reducing passive voice as much as possible.  I do not have significant change to add.  Please publish as soon as possible.
Doyle

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From: Shawn Henry [mailto:shawn@w3.org] 
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Subject: EOWG for Wednesday 13 May: Support publishing the business case & update availability

Dear Active EOWG Participants,

The emails below are about the updated business case document.

NOTE: *It would nice if you would send an email to the EOWG list today or tomorrow stating your support for publishing this updated version*.

Also, I've added additional dates to the Availability for Upcoming EOWG Teleconferences questionnaire at
 http://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/35532/availability/


Please update it when you have a chance.

Thanks!
~Shawn





-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Deadline Wednesday 13 May: Call for Review: Developing a Web Accessibility Business Case for Your Organization - update
Date: Wed, 13 May 2009 09:59:57 -0500
From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
References: <49FF0401.9080106@w3.org>

EOWG,

Here is a reminder that today is the deadline for comments on the business case updates, per the e-mail below.

Best,
~Shawn



-------- Original Message --------
Subject: Call for Review: Developing a Web Accessibility Business Case for Your Organization - update
Date: Mon, 04 May 2009 11:04:33 -0400
From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
To: EOWG (E-mail) <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
CC: Andi Snow-Weaver <andisnow@us.ibm.com>

Dear EOWG participants,

An updated version of "Developing a Web Accessibility Business Case for Your Organization" is ready for your review and approval to publish. See:
  http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/Overview.html

  http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html

  http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/tech.html

  http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/fin.html

  http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/pol.html

This update better covers accessibility for older users as well as WCAG 2.0. Changes from the currently published version are marked, to help you focus on the items that changed and not have to read carefully the entire document.

Please send any comments by *Wednesday 13 May*, or if you need more time to review, let us know before Wednesday. Once any comments are addressed, we will publish the updated version.

IMPORTANT: *Please indicate comments that are REQUIRED changes before this version is published, comments that are OPTIONAL for editor's discretion, and comments that can be addressed in the NEXT VERSION.*

We would like to publish this version in May, and then do another update (probably in June) to better cover the overlap with mobile.

Thanks,
~Shawn Henry & Andrew Arch, co-editors


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Shawn Lawton Henry
W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI)
e-mail: shawn@w3.org
phone: +1.617.395.7664
about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/

Received on Wednesday, 13 May 2009 21:26:32 UTC