- From: Lipkina, Natasha (hp.com) <natasha.lipkina@hp.com>
- Date: Wed, 13 Aug 2008 22:27:29 +0000
- To: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>, "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>, Yeliz Yesilada <yesilady@cs.man.ac.uk>, Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
Hi All, My two cents: 1. Delete parenthesis in the first sentence to be consistent or maybe even to tighten the sentence: People with disabilities using computers and people without disabilities who are using mobile devices have similar limitations and experience similar barriers when interacting with Web sites. 2. I have a question: As we differentiate between PWD using computers (excluding mobile devices) and people without limitations using mobile devices I think it would be nice to have some kind of disclosure that this paper does not cover experiences of PWD who are using mobile devices... Best regards, Natasha Lipkina HP.com Accessibility/Domain Naming Programs Manager 650-596-0752 -----Original Message----- From: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Shawn Henry Sent: Wednesday, August 13, 2008 2:34 PM To: EOWG (E-mail); Yeliz Yesilada; Judy Brewer Subject: Shared Web Experiences - review comments EOWG and Yeliz, I've just finished another thorough read-through of the "Shared Web Experiences: Barriers Common to Mobile Device Users and People with Disabilities" document at <http://www.w3.org/WAI/mobile/experiences-new-format> It's looking very good! I have noted a few suggestions for additions and requests for clarification -- for editor consideration and EOWG discussion where needed -- in a draft at <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/MWBP-WCAG/experiences-SLH.html> Reminder: The Shared Web Experiences document is the main topic on the agenda for this week, 15 August, and this week may be the last EOWG discussion of it before the completed version is published. Regards, ~Shawn
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