- From: Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 07 Aug 2008 13:54:24 -0500
- To: hbj@visinfo.dk
- Cc: "'EOWG (E-mail)'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Thanks for the feedback, Helle. Comments below. hbj@visinfo.dk wrote: > Great work! > > I have one question in the section: “Getting from one document to the > other”: First I thought the second bloc of text "sufficient > techniques..." was showing the content of either “How to meet WCAG 2” or > “How to understand WCAG 2”.Think there need to be some space or > something else to show that the second frame is another example. I think your first thought is correct -- that is, the "screen capture" in the middle is from both How to Meet and Understanding. I added bullets above the image explaining that. Let's discussion in the EOWG teleconference how best to present this in text and images... previous version: http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/wcag20-docs-old.php updated version: http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/wcag20-docs.php > Also the text “single topic page or whole document” section 3: “the > entire …” is hard to read Is this information necessary here? I reworded it and integrated with with the bullets above the images. Let me know what you think... Thanks, ~Shawn > Cheers > > Helle > > > > Sincerely > Helle Bjarnø > Visual Impairment Knowledge Centre > Rymarksvej 1, 2900 Hellerup, Denmark > Phone: +45 39 46 01 01 > fax: +45 39 61 94 14 > e-mail hbj@visinfo.dk <BLOCKED::mailto:hbj@visinfo.dk> > Direct phone: +45 39 46 01 04 > Mobile: +45 20 43 43 47 > www.visinfo.dk <blocked::file://www.visinfo.dk> > > > > -----Oprindelig meddelelse----- > Fra: w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org [mailto:w3c-wai-eo-request@w3.org] På > vegne af Shawn Henry > Sendt: 5. august 2008 00:35 > Til: EOWG (E-mail) > Emne: EOWG: Another pass at an image of the WCAG 2.0 documents > > > > > > EOWG, > > > > We had a good discussion at Friday's EOWG teleconference about > presenting the WCAG 2.0 documents in an image. The minutes are here: > <http://www.w3.org/2008/08/01-eo-minutes#item02> Shadi, Andrew, and I > had some additional discussion after the EOWG teleconference. > > > > Based on these discussions, I propose for EOWG consideration: > > - Adding to the analysis that the main goal is to answer: "What document > do I go to for what information?". Previously discussed goals are at > <http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-quicktips#wcag20docs> > > - A revised page with images and text at > <http://www.w3.org/WAI/WCAG20/wcag20-docs> > > > > Please reply to the list with your thoughts on this updated page, including: > > * Generally what do you think of the first image layout with WCAG in the > center? > > * Ideas for tweaking the first image? > > * Overall suggestions for this page? > > * Specific suggestions on the wording, or on the links image? > > > > As I said last week, we have a lot of work in EOWG right now and need to > do some via e-mail. > > > > Thanks, > > ~Shawn > > > > ----- > > Shawn Lawton Henry, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) > > about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/ > > phone: +1-617-395-7664 > > e-mail: shawn@w3.org > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- Shawn Lawton Henry, W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/ phone: +1-617-395-7664 e-mail: shawn@w3.org
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