Readings WAI-ARIA Suite Overview

I had trouble reading this in the "What is in the WAI-ARIA Suite" in the  
WAI-ARIA Suite Overview [1]:
[quote]
* Identifying menus, primary content...
* Mapping controls, Ajax live regions... to  accessibility APIs
[end quote]

As the verb (gerund) is seperated from the object with a list in between.  
Perhaps it would be easier to add a "Ways to identify..." at the beginning  
or "Controls, Ajax live regions... can be mapped to"

Also "outlines" in "The WAI-ARIA Roadmap outlines" is confusing too.  
"Describes ways to" might be easier to grasp.

I found the overview "correct" but hard to understand. Terms and phrases  
like "navigation destinations", "dictionary of Web page features"  
"developing in the missing pieces"

In the phrase "For Web content developers and authoring tool developers, a  
separate document would provide best practices...", "a separate document  
would provide" isn't quite right. Is WAI going to produce the document?  
Perhaps it would be better to say "a separate document to be produced  
later will provide..."

[1] http://www.w3.org/WAI/intro/aria.php

regards,

Alan



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Received on Friday, 21 September 2007 08:21:10 UTC