- From: William Loughborough <love26@gorge.net>
- Date: Fri, 17 Mar 2006 19:40:04 -0800
- To: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
- CC: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Judy Brewer wrote: > take a look and let me know if this addresses the concerns raised today. Paragraph 2, sentence 1 says "...encourages [should be "encourage" for grammar]" while the next sentence are "...would improve..." and "...would help". The first verb is wussy and the next two are forthright. Our recommendations are, of course, *correct*! I would describe the tone of this as "brassier", and that's a good thing. Love.
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