Re: Updated abstract for Standards Harmonization

Judy Brewer wrote:

> take a look and let me know if this addresses the concerns raised today.

Paragraph 2, sentence 1 says "...encourages [should be "encourage" for 
grammar]" while the next sentence are "...would improve..." and 
"...would help". The first verb is wussy and the next two are 
forthright. Our recommendations are, of course, *correct*!

I would describe the tone of this as "brassier", and that's a good thing.


Received on Saturday, 18 March 2006 03:39:56 UTC