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EOWG: Lexicon for your review...

From: Alan Chuter <achuter@teleservicios.es>
Date: Mon, 09 May 2005 10:00:44 +0200
Message-ID: <opsqh0jir2x03efm@0032k2d.e-fti.com>
To: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>

Here are some comments on different parts (not all) of the document. I  
sent this before Friday's meeting but to w3c-wai-eo-request by mistake.

Conformance.

* Perhaps this could be simlplified as something like "Said
    of / describes a product or service...".
* We could also perhaps omit "attains" as the item is often
    conformant without effort, for example "Describes a product
    or service that satisfies all the requirements..."

Render. "The user agent may emphasis the content responding to CSS
directions by changing font or tone of voice."

* Something is needed to tie this to the preceding sentence
   as it is part of the example, not the definition.
* I think mentioning CSS is unnecessary here as the UA would
   add emphasis even without CSS.
* Spelling "add emphasis" or "emphasise / emphasize"

Linearized content. "...web content in a sequential order..." I think that  
non-linearized content also has a sequential order. The point is that the  
sequence may be different. I think linearisation is about removing  
anything that alters the reading order perceived by the user.

Introduction: The phrase "Beginners lexicon for WAI documents is to aid
translators" seems odd. I don't think that beginners would be translating
these documents. Perhaps something like "may also be of use to
translators".

best regards,

Alan Chuter
Fundosa Teleservicios
achuter@teleservicios.es
Tel. +34 91 1210335


En Wed, 20 Apr 2005 13:23:51 -0500, Shawn Henry <shawn@w3.org> escribió:

>
> In reply to:  
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2005AprJun/0021.html
>
> EOWG:
>
> We will discuss the Lexicon at the teleconference this week, as needed.  
> Please send any issues you want to discuss to the list prior to the  
> meeting.
>
> The Lexicon review draft is available online at:  
> http://www.w3.org/WAI/lexicon/Overview.html
>
> The discussion at the EOWG teleconference(s) will focus on comments sent  
> to the list. Therefore, please send your comments ahead of time and as  
> possible include:
> - clear designation of the word/term you are commenting on, and the  
> specific wording in the definition that you are commenting on
> - issues or potential problems with the current wording
> - suggested revision
>
> Regards,
>
> ~ Henk, Shawn, Judy
>
>



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Alan Chuter
Fundosa Teleservicios
achuter@teleservicios.es
Tel. +34 91 1210335
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