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RE: [components] updated, please comment Tuesday 28 Sept 2004

From: Shadi Abou-Zahra <shadi@w3.org>
Date: Tue, 28 Sep 2004 13:27:18 +0200
To: "'EOWG (E-mail)'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Message-ID: <009001c4a54e$1d8787b0$6466a8c0@K2>

Hello,

The document looks great!

...but in section "The Implementation Cycle", I find the tone a little
too moderate ("more likely" etc). For example:

| When authoring tools make a feature easy to implement, developers are 
| more likely to implement it in their content

might be better worded in terms such as:

| When authoring tools make a feature easy to implement, developers will

| not need to manually implement it in their content

I don't necessarily like "manually implement" since they may be using
different tools for "partial remedy" but I hope you understand what I'm
trying to get at.

Regards,
  Shadi


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Subject: [components] updated, please comment Tuesday 28 Sept 2004



EOWG,

I update the Components document, incorporating the items from Friday's
teleconference and from email.
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/UCD/components
changelog:
	http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/changelogs/cl-components

I added back in the ALT example (with revisions based on feedback from
Shadi and Wayne) and added an image along with it.
* Please send comments on the ALT image to the EO list
(w3c-wai-eo@w3.org)
* Please send copyedits on the other areas to the EO editors list:
wai-eo-editors@w3.org

If possible, please send comments by Tuesday 28 September so that I can
incorporate them for a  review in another group on Wednesday.

~ Shawn
Received on Tuesday, 28 September 2004 11:27:14 UTC

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