- From: Sylvie Duchateau <sylvie.duchateau@snv.jussieu.fr>
- Date: Thu, 15 Jul 2004 14:25:45 +0200
- To: "Shawn Lawton Henry" <shawn@w3.org>, "'EOWG (E-mail'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Hello Shawn and all,
here are some comments for the document:
Introduction to the Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) Overview Slide Show
Last updated $Date: 2004/07/13
Version: Early Rough Draft 2004.07.14
1. What is the WAI Overview Slide Show
The end of first sentence could be clearer: "...a number of participation
options, and action steps to consider." Participation to what and which
action steps?
Suggestion: how to participate in the work of WAI or different ways to
participate in WAI work; action steps to consider to improve Web
accessibility.
2. How to use the HTML slide show.
The explanation of the different navigation buttons are not clear when not
seeing the images and reading text equivalent. With a screen reader it reads:
"To back up, use the left-arrow button
sample image of left arrow button ("Back to..." link)."
Suggestion: replace text equivalent "sample image of left arrow button" by
alt=""".
Or: To back up, use the alt="left-arrow button"
("Back to..." link)."
Same suggestions for the following buttons.
Regards
Sylvie
Received on Thursday, 15 July 2004 08:26:07 UTC