- From: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 01 Jul 2004 23:01:13 -0400
- To: Alan Chuter <achuter@teleservicios.com>, EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
All fixed using similar solutions to those suggested below. Thanks, - Judy At 11:05 AM 3/12/2004 +0100, Alan Chuter wrote: >I just asked a non-native speaker to read the supermarket assistant >section and we think that the following are difficult to understand: > >* "[he] finds the number of product choices overwhelming" > maybe we could say somthing like > "[he] finds that there are so many product choices that he becomes confused" > >* Although the title is easier to understand with "supermarket", "store" >is still used in the text. > >* "rearranges its product layout" > could be "changes the layout of the products in the store" or "He has > difficulty finding products because they are often in a different place" > >* "they used _consistent design_ and _navigation options_" the reader was >confused by the link text as "consistent" becomes separated when reading >the text of the second link independently (like "they used ... navigation >options") > >* "few fresh daily items" could be "few fresh items each day" > >In the references (#intell, #supl, #search etc) the link text is still >"clerk". > >One problem I've had with internationalisation of disability information >is "seizure disorders" which doesn't translate easily into Spanish. > >best, > >Alan > > > > > >On Fri, 12 Mar 2004 00:42:00 -0500, Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org> wrote: > >> >>EOWG: >> >>I have again updated the draft of "How People with Disabilities Use the Web": >>http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/20040302.html >> >>The change log is up-to-date: >>http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/PWD-Use-Web/changelog.html >> >>I've incorporated some of our most recent change requests from last week, >>and made more progress on the old change requests. >> >>In reviewing the document, please: >>- check for internationalization of disability terminology >>- check for gaps in assistive technology and adaptive computing >>- review the "teenager" example >>- review (again) the "supermarket assistant" example >> >>Thank you, >> >>- Judy >> > > > >-- >Alan Chuter >achuter@teleservicios.com -- Judy Brewer +1.617.258.9741 http://www.w3.org/WAI Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI), World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) MIT/CSAIL Building 32-G530 32 Vassar Street Cambridge, MA, 02139, USA
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