- From: Shawn Lawton Henry <shawn@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 25 Mar 2004 08:29:39 -0600
- To: <Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au>
- Cc: "'EOWG (E-mail)'" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Andrew, Thanks! I added your page to the "misc notes to incorporate" section of: http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/refs.html ~ Shawn > -----Original Message----- > From: Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au > [mailto:Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au] > Sent: Thursday, March 25, 2004 1:21 AM > To: shawn@w3.org > Cc: EOWG (E-mail) > Subject: Re: business case review this week for Friday 26 > March teleconference > > > > Hi Shawn, > > WRT the references page, this is the start of a page I was > preparing ages ago for the Auxiliary Benefits document - some > of it may still be useful. > > http://home.vicnet.net.au/%7Ewebacces/wai-eo/auxbenefits-refs.html > > Andrew > > > > > > > "Shawn Lawton > > Henry" To: > "EOWG (E-mail)" <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org> > <shawn@w3.org> cc: > > Sent by: Subject: > business case review this week for Friday 26 March > w3c-wai-eo-reques > teleconference > > t@w3.org > > > > > > 25/03/2004 08:30 > > AM > > > > > > > > > > > EOWG folks, > > The 4 main sub pages of the "business case" (Social Factors, > Technical Factors, Financial Factors, and Legal & Policy > Factors) are ready for final content review. (I will do one > more pass at "wordsmithing" and copyediting of these pages.) > I have not edited the Overview at all and it needs a rewrite, > and the new References page is just notes dumped in and needs > lots of work. > > For the Friday 26 March teleconference, please focus your > content review on the following pages: > - http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/soc.html > >Social Factors > - > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/tech.html >Technical Factors > - > http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/econ.html >Financial Factors > - http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/Drafts/bcase/pol.html > >Legal & Policy Factors > > and the following issues: > > a. Are all topics covered? How is the depth of coverage (not > too much, yet enough to explain)? Are the topics covered in > the right page? Are the appropriately referenced from other > pages in which they apply? > > b. How does the new format (having customization questions > first) work? (It seems to me to work very well in Social > Factors. In Legal & Policy Factors, it is too repetitive with > the "Considerations for Different Types of Organizations" > section (in a previous e-mail I offered ideas for addressing > this). In Technical Factors the questions section doesn't > seem necessary, but I think OK to leave for consistency. In > Financial Factors, it seems a little bit redundant with the > rest of it, but probably will be good after a little tweaking.) > > Please also see additional review questions in e-mail sent to > the list on Monday 15 March, archived at: > http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-eo/2004JanMar/0142.html IMPORTANT NOTE: Please send comments to the appropriate list. - send copyedits (such as typos) and things that do not need EOWG discussion to: wai-eo-editors@w3.org and shawn@w3.org - send anything that needs EOWG discussion to: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org (please do NOT copy shawn@w3.org) Regards, ~ Shawn Shawn Lawton Henry W3C Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI) e-mail: shawn@w3.org phone: +1.617.253.8788 about: http://www.w3.org/People/Shawn/
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