- From: Judy Brewer <jbrewer@w3.org>
- Date: Fri, 07 May 2004 01:35:10 -0400
- To: Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au
- Cc: EOWG <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
Andrew, Sorry, I received these change requests after completing and sending out a copy-edited version of the document over the EOWG list. We can discuss these on the EOWG call. You might want to look at the copy-edited version to see if any of your comments might change. Thanks for your comments. - Judy At 01:47 PM 5/7/2004 +1000, Andrew.Arch@visionaustralia.org.au wrote: >Hello Judy/All, > >I have sent a few copy-edit suggestions to EO-Editors, but include some >suggestions for new material and restructure here: > >1. Organisations: > >Suggest an additional para (to become para 2) talking about minimum levels >of accessibility aimed for by multi-region/multi-jurisdiction organisations >because they face different and/or conflicting standards, rather than >aiming for a higher level of accessibility that would be practical if they >only faced one standard. > >2. Browsers etc > >2.1 Suggest an additional paragraph along the lines of: >"adopting structural markup and W3C (technical) standards will >drive/encourage assistive technology developers to reveal more semantic >information to users of these technologies" >- currently this section has Assistive Technology in the heading, but not >in the text. > >2.2 Can we expand the "Browsers etc" section to include Evaluation Tools? >If so, then I suggest moving the first para and the three dot points for >"Fragmentation" to the end of the "Browsers etc" section. > >3. Fragmentation > >3.1 If we adopted my suggestion 2.2 (above), then the remaining material is >really about myths - suggest a changed heading to "Myths Regarding >Harmonisation" > >3.2 Suggestion for the last para that starts "For organizations that have >already developed ..." along the lines of: > >Governments and organisations that have already developed their own >accessibility guidelines should: ># consider becoming involved in one of the WAI working groups to ensure >that their needs are heard within W3C ># monitor the development of future versions of the W3C accessibility >guidelines and actively comment on the public drafts ># redirect their localisation energies into ensuring adoption of >international standards by authoring and evaluation tool developers ( and >getting local translations of these tools?), and website developers and >publishers ># look to becoming involved in W3C's authorised translation program ># develop a process for updating local policies and standards to harmonise >with the next releases of the W3C international accessibility guidelines > >4. Action Steps > >4.1 Paragraph one talks about WCAG 2.0 - what about mentioning ATAG 2.0? > >4.2 Suggest an extra dot point along the lines of >"more demand on user agents (and assistive technologies?) to reveal and >provide access to the semantic and accessibility aspects of web pages" > >4.3 What about a dot point about translations? > >Regards, Andrew > > >_________________________________ >Dr Andrew Arch >Manager Online Accessibility Consulting >National Information & Library Service, Australia >Ph 613 9864 9222; Fax 613 9864 9210; Mobile 0438 755 565 >http://www.nils.org.au/ | http://www.it-test.com.au/ | >http://www.ozewai.org/ > >Member, Education & Outreach Working Group, >W3C Web Accessibility Initiative >http://www.w3.org/WAI/EO/ > >NILS - A Joint Venture between the >Royal Victorian Institute for the Blind, The Royal Blind Society of NSW, >and Vision Australia Foundation. -- Judy Brewer +1.617.258.9741 http://www.w3.org/WAI Director, Web Accessibility Initiative (WAI), World Wide Web Consortium (W3C) MIT/CSAIL Building 32-G530 32 Vassar Street Cambridge, MA, 02139, USA
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