- From: Sailesh Panchang <sailesh.panchang@deque.com>
- Date: Thu, 21 Aug 2003 10:49:22 -0400
- To: <w3c-wai-eo@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <013701c367f3$68de2a50$9c01a8c0@deque.local>
Hello All, 1. The abstract does not read like one. An abstract should be a summary / shhort overview of the doc. This is unlike the one for WCAG 1.0 which really reads like an abstract. 2. There is a need for a "Background" somewhere at the start of the doc. It can become the basis for a later section that will explain transition from 1.0 to 2.0. More importantly it is necessary to state what has changed since 1.0 was released and why there is a need for 2.0. The abstract now merely states that feedback on 1.0 is being incorporated and "It attempts to apply checkpoints to a wider range of technologies and to use wording that may be understood by a more varied audience". I find this tenuous and do not find it reason enough to migrate from 1.0 to 2.0. Why is a change in conformance methodology necessary from the P1, p2 etc style ? - "Wider technology" needs to be clarified enough to justify a new guideline that changes priority levels of existing checkpoints. Note that 1.0 also mentions SMIL, MathML and CSS. Client/Server side scripting and XML also have been around before release of 1.0. Hand held devices and mobile technology too have been around ...they are more advanced now. - Significant issues raised by feedback on 1.0 needs to be referenced in the background too. - Will one have the option to continue using 1.0 ? 3. The Introduction section of 1.0 brings out the beneficiaries of accessible design very eloquently. Can something similar be incorporated here in 2.0? Thanks, Sailesh Panchang Senior Accessibility Engineer Deque Systems Inc 11180 Sunrise Valley Drive, 4th Floor, Reston VA 20191 Tel: 703-225-0380 Extension 105 Fax: 703-225-0387 E-mail: sailesh.panchang@deque.com * Look up <http://www.deque.com> *
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