- From: Chuck Letourneau <cpl@starlingweb.com>
- Date: Fri, 10 Sep 1999 09:46:50 -0400
- To: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
- Cc: jbrewer@w3.org
1) minor point about the long first sentence in Section one, Paragraph three that ends: "one because of inability to visually track the pointer, and the other because of inability to move the hands". To ensure clarity, I would suggest either changing this to read: "the former because of inability to visually track the pointer, and the latter because of inability to move the hands", or, "one because of inability to visually track the pointer, and the other because of inability to move the hands, respectively" 2 Paragraph 4: "A Checklist is available to test Web sites for accessibility…" This makes it sound like the checklist is an automatic tool, like Bobby. Maybe something like " A Checklist is available to aid in reviewing Web sites for accessibility… " Regards, Chuck Letourneau ---- Starling Access Services "Access A World Of Possibility" e-mail: info@starlingweb.com URL: http://www.starlingweb.com Phone: 613-820-2272 FAX: 613-820-6983
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