- From: Daniel Dardailler <danield@w3.org>
- Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 14:15:13 +0100
- To: Mike Paciello <paciello@ma.ultranet.com>
- cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org
> 1. Each term should be set off from the term's definition. Use a period or > colon. I'm not sure about that, the font change might be enough. Other opinion ? Maybe it's for the graphic designer to decide... > 2. For Hypertext Links, reword second statement to: "For example, do not use > "click here". (not sure whether the period goes inside the quotes or > outside in this situation. Check with an editor. Changed. > 3. For Multimedia, I think you can remove the comma after "descriptions of > video". I'm pretty sure you can replace the words, "in case" with the word > "when". We just changed it from "when" in "in case". See Judy's comments. > 4. For Page Organization, I think you can remove the comma after "lists" I'm not sure what's the rule for comma before and in english. In French, it's not used. > 5. For Check your work, the statement is not quite clear. Change to either, > "Use > evaluation tools and a text only browser to verify accessibility." or "Use > evaluation tools and text only browsers to verify accessibility". done
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