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Re: waicard10

From: Daniel Dardailler <danield@w3.org>
Date: Thu, 04 Feb 1999 14:15:13 +0100
Message-Id: <199902041315.OAA12285@www47.inria.fr>
To: Mike Paciello <paciello@ma.ultranet.com>
cc: w3c-wai-eo@w3.org

> 1. Each term should be set off from the term's definition. Use a period or
> colon.

I'm not sure about that, the font change might be enough.

Other opinion ?

Maybe it's for the graphic designer to decide...

> 2. For Hypertext Links, reword second statement to: "For example, do not use
> "click here". (not sure whether the period goes inside the quotes or
> outside in this situation. Check with an editor.

Changed.

> 3. For Multimedia, I think you can remove the comma after "descriptions of
> video". I'm pretty sure you can replace the words, "in case" with the word
> "when".

We just changed it from "when" in "in case". See Judy's comments.

> 4. For Page Organization, I think you can remove the comma after "lists"

I'm not sure what's the rule for comma before and in english. In
French, it's not used.

> 5. For Check your work, the statement is not quite clear. Change to either,
> "Use
> evaluation tools and a text only browser to verify accessibility." or "Use
> evaluation tools and text only browsers to verify accessibility". 

done
Received on Thursday, 4 February 1999 08:15:26 UTC

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