Comments on potential last call draft

General comment on layout. Too wide to fit on 8.5x11 forms with out some 
content being cut off.  may want to fix.  Problem is with figures 1 and 2.

2.1 Conformance

Level triple A  - Would it be better to say "All checkpoints" (vs priority 
1, 2, 3)

Conformance Claim components

3 Required conformance profile - It can only be ATAG 2.0, else different 
conformance claim

A.1.1  Wording of web-based statement is poor.

A.2.1 Web based criteria text should be indented

A.3.3 Success Criteria 1 - this seems to require web-based documentation. 
Is this really what we want?

B.1.1 criteria 2 - this is a hard one to do (must find or author a 
benchmark) and its priority 1. Are we sure we want to require this?


Looks good otherwise.

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