- From: Tim Boland <frederick.boland@nist.gov>
- Date: Tue, 20 Jul 2004 14:56:16 -0400
- To: w3c-wai-au@w3.org
I would replace "any" with "all", in first sentence, and insert "all" before "accessibility" in front of second sentence. Also, how does a function "occur" (ambiguous)? Do you mean a function is "invoked" or "called"? Also, I'm still confused as to how a "workflow" completes. A process following a workflow may complete (according to the rules of the workflow)? At 01:39 PM 7/20/2004 -0400, you wrote: >I think Jutta's text hits the nail on the head. I've just made a couple of >minor edits: > >Accessibility prompting must be integrated into any features that assist >with author decision-making (e.g. templates, wizards and instruction >text). Accessibility checking, repair and documentation functions must >occur before completion of the authoring workflow. > >Suggestions or comments? > >Cheers, >Jan > >Jutta Treviranus wrote: > >>Here is proposed rewording of Checkpoint 4.3, success criteria 1. Because >>this refers to timing and workflow, I felt that the previous success >>criteria did not address the need to time the accessibility functions at >>the appropriate time in the workflow. Suggestions, comments? >>Jutta >>New wording: >>Accessibility prompting must be integrated into any guidance offered to >>the author that assists in making authoring decisions (including >>templates, wizards and instructive text in dialogs). Accessibility >>checking, repair and documentation functions must occur before completion >>of the authoring workflow. >> >>Old Wording: >>*Accessibility prompting, checking, and repair functions and >>documentations/ must/ occur before completion of authoring workflow. >>[@@note to us: this allows accessibility checking to be the last step in >>workflow, if necessary@@][@@wording is still flexible@@] [@@maybe we can >>allow authoring to define scope of workflow with input from author@@]* >>* >>* > >-- >Jan Richards, M.Sc. >User Interface Design Specialist >Adaptive Technology Resource Centre (ATRC), University of Toronto > > Email: jan.richards@utoronto.ca > Web: http://jan.atrc.utoronto.ca > Phone: 416-946-7060 > Fax: 416-971-2896 > > >
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