- From: Jan Richards <jan.richards@utoronto.ca>
- Date: Mon, 14 Apr 2003 16:48:36 -0400
- To: Tim Boland <frederick.boland@nist.gov>
- CC: w3c-wai-au@w3.org
Hi Tim, Some comments on the sections of your document: http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-wai-au/2003AprJun/att-0005/wai1.htm >1. Success criteria are not consistently stated. Do you mean the words "Ensure", "Allow", "Provide" etc? >2. Terminology is not consistent or well-defined I agree, although I think "markup" has been properly separated from "content" in 2.3. >3. The kind of accessibility desired is not stated explicitly While I generally don't think we need to get into a classification of disabilities, I would agree that 1.1's success criteria need much work. >4. It is difficult to determine what is required (minimum >requirements) How about "must allow ... WHEN APPLICABLE?" instead of "should allow"? How about changing "easily" and "quickly" to "comparable to the ease/speed with which similar features in the tool are already performed"? >5. It seems like implementation techniques, informational statements, >and conformance requirements are mixed in together >... >PROPOSED SOLUTION: Only use conformance requirement language (or >pecify options where applicable) in success criteria language. Agreed. >6. Some of the success criteria seem to be duplicates of one another >... >PROPOSED SOLUTION: Ensure that semantics of each success criteria is >unique, and that each sentence in a success criteria statement >contributes to the meaning of a success criteria statement in a >consistent fashion, and is necessary for that meaning. re: 1.4 - agreed re: 2.3 - not agreed re: 1.2,1.3,1.5,1.6 - I think these are related but different enough I agree with the solution >7. References to WCAG are nonspecific. Yes, we are putting together another document which will handle the reference. This allows the same version of ATAG 2.0 to handle WCAG 1.0, 2.0 and 3.0 (as now seems more likely). --- The other comments look good. We need to keep all this in mind as we move forward on success criteria. --- Tim Boland wrote: > > Attached is an html document which summarizes comments on evaluating ATAG > WD success criteria for objectivity (as I was requested to do by Matt > May). Comments welcome. > Best wishes, Tim Boland NIST > > ------------------------------------------------------------------------ > > wai1.htmName: wai1.htm > Type: Hypertext Markup Language (text/html) -- Jan Richards, User Interface Design Specialist Adaptive Technology Resource Centre (ATRC), University of Toronto Email: jan.richards@utoronto.ca Web: http://ultrajuan.ic.utoronto.ca/jan/richards.html Phone: 416-946-7060 Fax: 416-971-2896
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