Re: proposed re-wording of goals statement

GJR:: "The authoring tool will create accessible content by default,   
according to a user-configurable schedule"

WL: Please put a full stop after "default" - enough "user-configurabale
schedule" already in place.  Not sure about "will create"; might be
"creates" to parallel first goal and "encourages" in the third one, else
"will be" for "is" in first goal?

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Received on Wednesday, 16 June 1999 14:57:52 UTC