Re: New Charmod 2003-08-22

On Tue, 2 Sep 2003 11:25:00 -0400
Dan Brickley <danbri@w3.org> wrote:

> * Jeremy Carroll <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com> [2003-09-02 16:09+0100]
> > 
> > Sorry, I had missed that you had already sent a satisfactory draft
> > for SOTD.
> > 
> > I've reread and commented on the (section of the) process document.
> > 
> > Your suggeted text
> > [[
> > This Working Draft consolidates changes and editorial improvements
> > 	undertaken in response to feedback received during the Last Call
> > 	publication of the RDFCore specifications which began on 23
> > 	January 2003.
> > 
> > ]]
> > 
> > is more elegant (IMHO) than the text you copied out below.
> 
> Thanks.
> http://www.w3.org/2001/sw/RDFCore/TR/templates/sept-wd-sotd.html seems
> ok by you, Graham and Brian. I suggest we go with it, if Eric and
> others have tweaks they shouldn't be too big.

Looks OK to me.

Incidently: I didn't receive Dan's original email in this thread
and only got this one since it was sent direct to me.  The W3C list
archives don't have any September emails so I couldn't check.  Seems
like something is still amiss.

Dave

Received on Tuesday, 2 September 2003 19:42:54 UTC