- From: Graham Klyne <gk@ninebynine.org>
- Date: Tue, 22 Jul 2003 18:31:40 +0100
- To: "Jeremy Carroll" <jjc@hplb.hpl.hp.com>, <w3c-rdfcore-wg@w3.org>
At 17:31 22/07/03 +0200, Jeremy Carroll wrote: >Trying to incorporate comments from Pat, Frank and Martin ... I think this is better. I have some stylistic comments, modulo acceptance of the broader thrust... >[[ >For text that may contain markup, the use of >typed literals >with type rdf:XMLLiteral is suitable. "suitable" seems an odd word to use here. Suggestion: [[ For text that may contain markup, use datatype rdf:XMLLiteral literals. ]] >In such cases, if a language tag is required it must be >explicitly included within the markup, usually >as the value >of an xml:lang attribute. This presumes a particular form of language annotation. Suggestion: [[ If language annotation is required, it must be explicitly included as markup, usually by means of of an xml:lang attribute. ]] (I suggest this runs on directly following the previous sentence.) >[XHTML] may be included within RDF in this way. >For mixed content XHTML requiring a language tag >an xml:lang >or lang attribute can be included on an additional span or div element. This seems to repeat some of what has gone before. Suggest: [[ [XHTML] may be included within RDF in this way. For mixed content XHTML an xml:lang or lang attribute can be included on an additional span or div element. ]] All taken together, this would yield: [[ For text that may contain markup, use datatype rdf:XMLLiteral literals. If language annotation is required, it must be explicitly included as markup, usually by means of of an xml:lang attribute. [XHTML] may be included within RDF in this way. For mixed content XHTML an xml:lang or lang attribute can be included on an additional span or div element. ]] BTW, what's "mixed content XHTML"? Are we going to try and relate this to Brian's suggestions [1] for the Primer? #g -- [1] http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-rdfcore-wg/2003Jul/0244.html ------------------- Graham Klyne <GK@NineByNine.org> PGP: 0FAA 69FF C083 000B A2E9 A131 01B9 1C7A DBCA CB5E
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