Fwd: Edits to concepts document, per 2003-01-10 telecon

I have updated the concepts LCC with the changes described below.

This document is now ready for publication, subject to a positive last call 
vote by the WG.

Brian

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>To: Brian McBride <bwm@hplb.hpl.hp.com>
>From: Graham Klyne <GK@NineByNine.org>
>Subject: Edits to concepts document, per 2003-01-10 telecon
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>Brian,
>
>These are the changes to concepts requested by the telecon.
>
>Having reread PFPS' review comments, I think there are many other useful 
>editorial changes that could be applied, but not at this stage.  These are 
>pretty simple.
>
>BTW, I've started a last-call issue list, available at:
>   http://www.ninebynine.org/wip/DocIssues/RDFConceptIssues-group-lcc.html
>
>...
>
>Section 3.1:
>
>ACTION 2003-01-10#9 (gk) correct concepts doc in line with danbri's
>         comment in 
> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/w3c-rdfcore-wg/2003Jan/0001.html
>
>Old:
>[[
>Each property arc represents a statement of a relationship between the 
>nodes that it links, having three parts:
>]]
>New:
>[[
>Each property arc represents a statement of a relationship between the 
>things denoted by the nodes that it links, having three parts:
>]]
>
>...
>
>Section 3.3:
>
>ACTION 2003-01-10#8 (gk) supply words for concepts section 3.3 to
>         address PatS' concerns that we stress DTing is not XSD-only.
>
>Old:
>[[
>RDF uses the datatype abstraction defined by XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes 
>[XML-SCHEMA2]. A datatype consists of a lexical space, a value space and a 
>datatype mapping.
>]]
>New:
>[[
>RDF uses the datatype abstraction defined by XML Schema Part 2: Datatypes 
>[XML-SCHEMA2], and may be used with any datatype definition that follows 
>this pattern.  A datatype consists of a lexical space, a value space and a 
>datatype mapping.
>]]
>
>...
>
>#g
>
>
>-------------------
>Graham Klyne
><GK@NineByNine.org>

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