- From: Lisa Dusseault <lisa@osafoundation.org>
- Date: Thu, 24 Nov 2005 09:49:06 -0800
- To: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Cc: webdav WG <w3c-dist-auth@w3.org>
Oops, wrote this up yesterday when I posted an interim version of the draft, but forgot to hit 'send'. ... I ended up not using this diff because I got distracted making other changes before remembering this diff. However, I did find it useful to refer to, to see exactly what you had in mind. The removal of subsections was not a conversion error originally but an editorial choice, deeming that inlined short examples can sometimes be good for readability. Nevertheless, I can go back to using subsections for every example, but in that case there are more examples (the example of using a precondition code in a 403 Forbidden was the first such one in 08) which are new, and which should also be sections on their own if that's our choice. Also note I indented some of the examples less as I went along -- consistently going for indentation of 2 spaces from the normal edge of text, and 2 spaces for each XML structural indentation. Lisa On Nov 22, 2005, at 6:03 AM, Julian Reschke wrote: > Lisa Dusseault wrote: >> I'm in favour of this change, and were you to supply me with a diff, >> it would happen all the sooner. Thanks ! > > OK, > > the attached source (+ diff) fixes: > > - artwork as discussed (also making indentation consistent and fixing > XML errors) > - makes the LOCK compatibility table a proper table (rfc2629 style) > > While doing this, I had also to re-add subsections for the examples > (this was lost in an earlier draft; I suspect that was an error due to > the conversion to XML source).
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