- From: Julian Reschke <julian.reschke@gmx.de>
- Date: Thu, 24 Nov 2005 12:53:19 +0100
- To: WebDAV <w3c-dist-auth@w3.org>
- Message-ID: <4385A9AF.1090403@gmx.de>
Hi, the attached diffs (+ XML) implement some more mainly editorial enhancements I hope we can agree upon: - update references that were outdated; some minor tweaks in citing the XML spec (it really doesn't need to be a reference every time we mentionn it, also point to the section for xml:lang explicitly) - front matter: obsoletes RFC2518, fix title and abbreviated title - intro: do not say "this draft" - more broken XML fixed (I'm really getting tired having to fix those again and again) - lock compatibility table made an RFC2629-style table Best regards, Julian
Index: draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml =================================================================== RCS file: /var/cvsroot/xml2rfc/draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml,v retrieving revision 1.10 diff -r1.10 draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest.xml 4d3 < <!ENTITY rfc2069 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2069.xml'> 7d5 < <!ENTITY rfc2279 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2279.xml'> 9d6 < <!ENTITY rfc2376 PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml/reference.RFC.2376.xml'> 17,18d13 < <!ENTITY w3cXMLNS PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml4/reference.W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114.xml'> < <!ENTITY w3cXML PUBLIC '' 'http://xml.resource.org/public/rfc/bibxml4/reference.W3C.REC-xml-20001006.xml'> 26c21 < <rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest"> --- > <rfc ipr="full3978" docName="draft-ietf-webdav-rfc2518bis-latest" obsoletes="2518"> 30,32c25 < <title abbrev="RFC2518bis"> < HTTP Extensions for Distributed Authoring - WebDAV RFC2518 bis < </title> --- > <title abbrev="WEBDAV">HTTP Extensions for Distributed Authoring - WebDAV</title> 62c55 < RFC2518 was published in February 1998, and this draft makes minor --- > RFC2518 was published in February 1999, and this document makes minor 137c130 < WebDAV uses <xref target="XML"/> for property names and some values, and also uses --- > WebDAV uses XML <xref target="REC-XML"/> for property names and some values, and also uses 272,273c265 < information either in an <xref target="XML"/> < request entity body, or in an HTTP header. The use of XML to encode --- > information either in an XML request entity body, or in an HTTP header. The use of XML to encode 286c278 < The <xref target="W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114">XML namespace extension</xref> --- > The XML namespace extension <xref target="REC-XML-NAMES"/> 1120,1121c1112,1113 < XML parsers that are compliant with <xref target="XML"/> < and <xref target="W3C.REC-xml-names-19990114">XML Namespaces</xref>. All --- > XML parsers that are compliant with <xref target="REC-XML"/> > and <xref target="REC-XML-NAMES"/>. All 2601c2593 < <figure> --- > <texttable> 2603d2594 < 2607,2615c2598,2601 < <artwork> < < Current State Shared Lock Request Exclusive Lock Request < ---------------------------------------------------------------- < None True True < Shared Lock True False < Exclusive Lock False False* < < </artwork> --- > <ttcol width="40%">Current lock state / Lock request</ttcol><ttcol>Shared Lock</ttcol><ttcol>Exclusive Lock</ttcol> > <c>None</c><c>True</c><c>True</c> > <c>Shared Lock</c><c>True</c><c>False</c> > <c>Exclusive Lock</c><c>False</c><c>False*</c> 2621,2622c2607 < </figure> < --- > </texttable> 2624d2608 < 2778,2779c2762,2763 < <D:href>urn:uuid:e71d4fae-5dec-22d6-fea5-00a0c91e6be4< < /D:href> --- > <D:href > >urn:uuid:e71d4fae-5dec-22d6-fea5-00a0c91e6be4</D:href> 2783,2784c2767 < >http://example.com/workspace/webdav/proposal.doc< < /D:href> --- > >http://example.com/workspace/webdav/proposal.doc</D:href> 3718c3701 < <xref target="XML"/>. The --- > <xref target="REC-XML"/>. The 4230c4213 < declaration using the format defined in <xref target="XML"/>. --- > declaration using the format defined in <xref target="REC-XML"/>. 4903c4886 < encoded, at minimum, using the UTF-8 <xref target="RFC2279"/> and UTF-16 encodings of --- > encoded, at minimum, using the UTF-8 <xref target="RFC3629"/> and UTF-16 encodings of 4906c4889 < Content-Type header, as defined in <xref target="RFC2376"/>, as well as the XML --- > Content-Type header, as defined in <xref target="RFC3023"/>, as well as the XML 4914c4897 < language of its content and attributes. See <xref target="XML"/> for --- > language of its content and attributes. See Section 2.12 of <xref target="REC-XML"/> for 4921c4904 < strongly encouraged to read "XML Media Types" <xref target="RFC2376"/> for --- > strongly encouraged to read "XML Media Types" <xref target="RFC3023"/> for 4974c4957 < <xref target="RFC2376"/>) also apply to WebDAV. In --- > <xref target="RFC3023"/>) also apply to WebDAV. In 5007c4990 < <xref target="RFC2069"/>. Since Digest authentication verifies that both parties to --- > <xref target="RFC2617"/>. Since Digest authentication verifies that both parties to 5091c5074 < section 4.2.2 of <xref target="XML"/>, which instruct an XML processor to --- > Section 4.2.2 of <xref target="REC-XML"/>, which instruct an XML processor to 5107c5090 < XML processor to the security risks discussed in <xref target="RFC2376"/>. --- > XML processor to the security risks discussed in <xref target="RFC3023"/>. 5307d5289 < &rfc2069; 5310d5291 < &rfc2279; 5316d5296 < &w3cXMLNS; 5318,5322c5298,5366 < <reference anchor="XML" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xml-20040204"> < <front> < <title>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)</title> < <author initials="T." surname="Bray" fullname="Tim Bray"> < <organization>Textuality and Netscape</organization> --- > <reference anchor="REC-XML" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xml-20040204"> > <front> > <title>Extensible Markup Language (XML) 1.0 (Third Edition)</title> > <author initials="T." surname="Bray" fullname="Tim Bray"> > <organization>Textuality and Netscape</organization> > <address> > <email>tbray@textuality.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="J." surname="Paoli" fullname="Jean Paoli"> > <organization>Microsoft</organization> > <address> > <email>jeanpa@microsoft.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="C.M." surname="Sperberg-McQueen" fullname="C. M. Sperberg-McQueen"> > <organization>University of Illinois at Chicago and Text Encoding Initiative</organization> > <address> > <email>cmsmcq@uic.edu</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="E." surname="Maler" fullname="Eve Maler"> > <organization>Sun Microsystems</organization> > <address> > <email>eve.maler@east.sun.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="Francois Yergeau"> > <organization/> > <address> > <email>francois@yergeau.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <date day="4" month="February" year="2004"/> > </front> > <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-20040204"/> > </reference> > > <reference anchor="REC-XML-NAMES" target="http://www.w3.org/TR/1999/REC-xml-names-19990114"> > <front> > <title>Namespaces in XML</title> > <author initials="T." surname="Bray"> > <organization>Textuality</organization> > <address> > <email>tbray@textuality.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="D." surname="Hollander"> > <organization>Hewlett-Packard Company</organization> > <address> > <email>dmh@corp.hp.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <author initials="A." surname="Layman"> > <organization>Microsoft</organization> > <address> > <email>andrewl@microsoft.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <date month="January" year="1999" /> > </front> > <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-names-19990114" /> > </reference> > > <reference anchor="RFC2617"> > <front> > <title abbrev="HTTP Authentication">HTTP Authentication: Basic and Digest Access Authentication</title> > <author initials="J." surname="Franks" fullname="John Franks"> > <organization>Northwestern University, Department of Mathematics</organization> 5324c5368 < <email>tbray@textuality.com</email> --- > <email>john@math.nwu.edu</email> 5327,5328c5371,5372 < <author initials="J." surname="Paoli" fullname="Jean Paoli"> < <organization>Microsoft</organization> --- > <author initials="P.M." surname="Hallam-Baker" fullname="Phillip M. Hallam-Baker"> > <organization>Verisign Inc.</organization> 5330c5374 < <email>jeanpa@microsoft.com</email> --- > <email>pbaker@verisign.com</email> 5333,5334c5377,5378 < <author initials="C.M." surname="Sperberg-McQueen" fullname="C. M. Sperberg-McQueen"> < <organization>University of Illinois at Chicago and Text Encoding Initiative</organization> --- > <author initials="J.L." surname="Hostetler" fullname="Jeffery L. Hostetler"> > <organization>AbiSource, Inc.</organization> 5336c5380 < <email>cmsmcq@uic.edu</email> --- > <email>jeff@AbiSource.com</email> 5339,5340c5383,5384 < <author initials="E." surname="Maler" fullname="Eve Maler"> < <organization>Sun Microsystems</organization> --- > <author initials="S.D." surname="Lawrence" fullname="Scott D. Lawrence"> > <organization>Agranat Systems, Inc.</organization> 5342c5386 < <email>eve.maler@east.sun.com</email> --- > <email>lawrence@agranat.com</email> 5345,5346c5389,5390 < <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="Francois Yergeau"> < <organization/> --- > <author initials="P.J." surname="Leach" fullname="Paul J. Leach"> > <organization>Microsoft Corporation</organization> 5348c5392 < <email>francois@yergeau.com</email> --- > <email>paulle@microsoft.com</email> 5351,5355c5395,5441 < <date day="4" month="February" year="2004"/> < </front> < <seriesInfo name="W3C" value="REC-xml-20040204"/> < </reference> < --- > <author initials="A." surname="Luotonen" fullname="Ari Luotonen"> > <organization>Netscape Communications Corporation</organization> > </author> > <author initials="L." surname="Stewart" fullname="Lawrence C. Stewart"> > <organization>Open Market, Inc.</organization> > <address> > <email>stewart@OpenMarket.com</email> > </address> > </author> > <date month="June" year="1999"/> > </front> > <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="2617"/> > </reference> > > <reference anchor="RFC3023"> > <front> > <title>XML Media Types</title> > <author initials="M." surname="Makoto" fullname="Murata Makoto"> > <organization>IBM Tokyo Research Laboratory</organization> > <address><email>mmurata@trl.ibm.co.jp</email></address> > </author> > <author initials="S." surname="St.Laurent" fullname="Simon St.Laurent"> > <organization>simonstl.com</organization> > <address><email>simonstl@simonstl.com</email></address> > </author> > <author initials="D." surname="Kohn" fullname="Dan Kohn"> > <organization>Skymoon Ventures</organization> > <address><email>dan@dankohn.com</email></address> > </author> > <date month="January" year="2001"/> > </front> > <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3023"/> > </reference> > > <reference anchor="RFC3629"> > <front> > <title>UTF-8, a transformation format of ISO 10646</title> > <author initials="F." surname="Yergeau" fullname="F. Yergeau"> > <organization>Alis Technologies</organization> > <address><email>fyergeau@alis.com</email></address> > </author> > <date month="November" year="2003"/> > </front> > <seriesInfo name="RFC" value="3629"/> > <seriesInfo name="STD" value="63"/> > </reference> > 5361d5446 < &rfc2376;
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