- From: Frank Ellermann <nobody@xyzzy.claranet.de>
- Date: Sun, 31 Dec 2006 18:20:53 +0100
- To: uri@w3.org
- Cc: uri-review@ietf.org
Christopher R. Hertel wrote: > I could really use some help rewriting the draft > - to look more like a *real* IETF document, > - to fill in some of the gaps that are still there, > - to ensure compliance with existing RFCs. Just for fun I read pages 1..8 and 15..18, and found nothing too unusual. The concept of a workgroup context wrt to relative URLs is of course odd, but your description makes it clear. Or I think it does. You could add a more interesting example, where a server name exists in two groups, say group A with servers X and Y, and group B with servers Y and Z. After doing something with smb://X/ I'd expect ../Y to be the Y in group A, not the Y in group B, is that correct ? You already have an example for ../Y after accessing smb://A/. What about ../Z ? I'd expect it to be invalid, because there's no Z in A. Maybe you could extend your example in this direction. You need to split the references into "normative" and "informative", and you've to add "IANA considerations" (asking them to add smb and cifs to their URI registry). If you haven't done it yet run the I-D through http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/ and check your ABNF with http://rtg.ietf.org/~fenner/abnf.cgi At some point in time (IIRC February) you'll need the new boilerplate, in essence that's s/ISOC/IETF Trust/. The IETF Secretary will tell you when they don't accept the old boilerplate anymore. If there are UAs trying to interpret file://s/p like smb://s/p please mention it. "file" is one of the old schemes still waiting for its 3986-update, and doing this with a reference to your (future) RFC could simplify this task. Frank
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