Re: proposed rewrite of 2.1 of draft-fielding-uri-syntax ...

Dan Connolly (connolly@w3.org)
Mon, 05 Jan 1998 14:44:05 -0400


Message-ID: <34B129F5.4C90141B@w3.org>
Date: Mon, 05 Jan 1998 14:44:05 -0400
From: Dan Connolly <connolly@w3.org>
To: Larry Masinter <masinter@parc.xerox.com>
CC: uri-i18n@unicode.org, fielding@ics.uci.edu, uri@bunyip.com,
Subject: Re: proposed rewrite of 2.1 of draft-fielding-uri-syntax ...

Larry Masinter wrote:
> 
> Jacob Palme pointed out that the second (one line) paragraph
> of the current Section 2.1 of the URI/URL/whatever draft was
> hard to understand. With some amount of trepidation, I propose
> the following (alas lengthy) rewrite:
> -----------------------------------------------
> 2.1 URIs and non-ASCII characters

It looks correct to me. As to the length: I've tried
to explain it in fewer words, and I didn't have much luck.

See, for example:
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-html40-971218/appendix/notes.html#h-B.2.1

which I'm not completely happy with.

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Dan
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