Re: Review request for 1.1 and 2.0 publication drafts, deadline tomorrow pm

I have created diff's for all the documents both Recommendation track and Notes as listed in the 1.1 section of the roadmap. WIll do the 2.0 specs in a bit.

Also added links to errata documents that I just created for the 1.1 Recommendations.

Fixed a bug in the Signature Functional Explanation.

For the recommendations, the redline from the previous rec is not very useful due to the number of changes - the linked functional explanation is probably more useful.

Did not update the Algorithms Cross reference doc as I suggested earlier, as I don't think those changes are useful at this point.

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia



On Apr 9, 2013, at 7:56 AM, ext Innovimax W3C wrote:

> Hi Frederick,
> 
> Is there a way to see the diff with previous documents ?
> 
> Thanks
> 
> Mohamed
> 
> On Mon, Apr 8, 2013 at 11:42 PM,  <Frederick.Hirsch@nokia.com> wrote:
>> I have been preparing  the 1.1 Recommendations and associated Notes to publish this Thursday, assuming W3C Director approval. In conjunction with this I have also prepared to publish the 2.0 specifications as Working Group Notes.
>> 
>> I need your help to check for any errors, especially with examples, formatting, acknowledgements and the content of the abstracts and status sections.
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>> I have completed validation, link, css, spell and pubrules checks for all of the drafts (though I might have missed something)
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>> Links to the pre-publication drafts are on the roadmap page - please take a look at the drafts to see if you notice any errors or omissions.
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>> 1.1 Publication drafts linked from here: http://www.w3.org/2008/xmlsec/wiki/Roadmap#Next_steps_for_XML_Security_1.1
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>> 2.0 Publication drafts linked from here: http://www.w3.org/2008/xmlsec/wiki/Roadmap#Next_steps_for_XML_Security_2.0
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>> Worth noting is that I believe I've carried the 1.1 XML Signature changes into 2.0, so the XML Signature 2.0 status section notes those changes. In addition, since XML Signature 2.0 is changing into a W3C Note, I updated the conformance section to add a paragraph noting the document is informative - please review that this change is adequate. I also changed the 2.0 abstracts to make it clear that the documents are informative.
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>> You might also want to check the 2.0 Test Cases document to make sure the examples look right.
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>> There may be a last minute update to the RFC 4051 reference in XML Signature 1.1 and XML Signature 2.0 depending on whether we obtain it from the iETF in time.
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>> Please note Thomas and I have agreed to not publish updates to the interop documents, preferring to keep them as stable publications.
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>> If you have any additional review comments to note formatting or pre-publication errors please post them to the public list by end of day tomorrow (apologies for tight deadline, draft preparation took way longer than I expected)
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>> Thanks!
>> 
>> regards, Frederick
>> 
>> Frederick Hirsch
>> Nokia
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