Review request for 1.1 and 2.0 publication drafts, deadline tomorrow pm

I have been preparing  the 1.1 Recommendations and associated Notes to publish this Thursday, assuming W3C Director approval. In conjunction with this I have also prepared to publish the 2.0 specifications as Working Group Notes.

I need your help to check for any errors, especially with examples, formatting, acknowledgements and the content of the abstracts and status sections.

I have completed validation, link, css, spell and pubrules checks for all of the drafts (though I might have missed something)

Links to the pre-publication drafts are on the roadmap page - please take a look at the drafts to see if you notice any errors or omissions.

1.1 Publication drafts linked from here: http://www.w3.org/2008/xmlsec/wiki/Roadmap#Next_steps_for_XML_Security_1.1

2.0 Publication drafts linked from here: http://www.w3.org/2008/xmlsec/wiki/Roadmap#Next_steps_for_XML_Security_2.0

Worth noting is that I believe I've carried the 1.1 XML Signature changes into 2.0, so the XML Signature 2.0 status section notes those changes. In addition, since XML Signature 2.0 is changing into a W3C Note, I updated the conformance section to add a paragraph noting the document is informative - please review that this change is adequate. I also changed the 2.0 abstracts to make it clear that the documents are informative.

You might also want to check the 2.0 Test Cases document to make sure the examples look right.

There may be a last minute update to the RFC 4051 reference in XML Signature 1.1 and XML Signature 2.0 depending on whether we obtain it from the iETF in time.

Please note Thomas and I have agreed to not publish updates to the interop documents, preferring to keep them as stable publications.

If you have any additional review comments to note formatting or pre-publication errors please post them to the public list by end of day tomorrow (apologies for tight deadline, draft preparation took way longer than I expected)

Thanks!

regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia

Received on Monday, 8 April 2013 21:43:17 UTC