[ACTION-453] Review XML Enc v1.1

Wasn't ACTION-453 supposed to be closed in January?

http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-xmlsec/2010Jan/0084.html

Anyway, I have the following additional comments on the latest draft (I
think some of my old ones still apply too):

1. In section 4.1, replace "will break schemas" with words along the
lines of "will often cause the document with encrypted parts to become
invalid with respect to its schema".

2. In 5.6.2.1's title, capitalize the 'e' in 'explicit'.

3. In 8.2, do we need to still mention the Macintosh file type?

4. In 9.1, shouldn't the example be identified as non-normative?

This email should (really, really) close ACTION-453  ;-)

Ed


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Received on Tuesday, 20 April 2010 17:42:51 UTC