Re: ACTION-76 completed - clarify same-document reference, change URI reference

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regards, Frederick

Frederick Hirsch
Nokia


On Aug 7, 2007, at 12:00 PM, ext Thomas Roessler wrote:

> I wonder if the mention of same-document references in 4.3.3.1 is
> really needed...  I don't see "same-document" used in that section,
> so keeping that change to 4.3.3.2 should be enough.
>

I added it since a reference to URI is provided yet would be  
misleading if the reader were not considering the change to same- 
document references.


> There don't seem to be change marks in the references, and in the
> various places where 2396 used to be mentioned in the text.
>
arghh. I will go back and edit this again. Thanks for spotting this.

> Also, [URI-Literal] (RFC 2732) is obsoleted by 3986 as well, so the
> change of normative reference for [URI] probably entails some other
> changes to the text toward the end of the first paragraph of
> 4.3.3.1, and to that reference.  (Apologies for not having spotted
> that earlier.)

Thanks will review
>
> Tuning out into vacation mode again.
>
> Cheers,
> -- 
> Thomas Roessler, W3C  <tlr@w3.org>
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> On 2007-08-07 11:42:56 -0400, Frederick Hirsch wrote:
>> From: Frederick Hirsch <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
>> To: XMLSec <public-xmlsec-maintwg@w3.org>
>> Cc: Hirsch Frederick <frederick.hirsch@nokia.com>
>> Date: Tue, 7 Aug 2007 11:42:56 -0400
>> Subject: ACTION-76 completed - clarify same-document reference,  
>> change URI reference
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>> ACTION-77 completed - Make changes to document to (a) clarify same- 
>> document
>> URI reference, (b) change reference to URI
>>
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/ (refresh)
>>
>> see
>> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-xmlsec-commits/2007Aug/ 
>> 0020.html
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>> Changed reference for URI from RFC 2396 to RFC 3986.
>> Changed references to 2396 to 3986 in text.
>> Update 1st sentence of 4.3.3.1 The URI Attribute to clarify same- 
>> document
>> reference.
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#sec-URI
>>
>> Update same-document reference  in 4.3.3.2 The Reference  
>> Processing Model to
>> "In this specification, a 'same-document' reference is defined as a
>> URI-Reference that consists of hash sign ('#') followed by  
>> fragment or or
>> alternatively consists of an empty URI [URI].".  Tweak following two
>> paragraphs for clarity.
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmldsig-core/#sec- 
>> ReferenceProcessingModel
>>
>> Also updated URI reference in Decryption Transform
>> http://www.w3.org/2007/xmlsec/Drafts/xmlenc-decrypt/#URI
>>
>> see
>> http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Member/member-xmlsec-commits/2007Aug/ 
>> 0019.html
>>
>> regards, Frederick
>>
>> Frederick Hirsch
>> Nokia
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Received on Tuesday, 7 August 2007 17:29:02 UTC