- From: Alessandro Vernet <avernet@orbeon.com>
- Date: Wed, 15 Mar 2006 18:35:42 -0800
- To: public-xml-processing-model-wg@w3.org
Alex, We are getting close. I noted a couple of details while going through the document one more time: 1) Under "Definition: Input Document": s/that an input/that is an input/. Or we can maybe rephrase this: An XML infoset provided as input to a XML Pipeline or Step. 2) Under "3 Design Principles", s/The design principles [...] are a kind of requirement/The design principles [...] are requirements/ (I suggest to remove the "kind of", plural for requirements). 3) Under "Requirements", I am wondering if it is possible to add a border to the table. I think that this would make the table easier to read. Alex On 3/15/06, Alex Milowski <alex@milowski.org> wrote: > > I've made the following changes: > > * Added source attribution to 5.28 and 5.29 > * Updates from last telcon/minutes > * Fixed DSDL use case > * Added Henry's use cases > > http://www.w3.org/XML/XProc/docs/langreq.html > > I'll make another editorial pass tonight to look for > language issues. > > > -- > --Alex Milowski > > > -- Blog (XML, Web apps, Open Source): http://www.orbeon.com/blog/
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