Re: XML 5e: One more fix, perhaps

On Fri, Nov 14, 2008 at 03:12:56PM +0000, Henry S. Thompson wrote:
>   Reorganize and change the paragraphs at the beginning of the
>   introduction to the _Names and Tokens_ productions as follows:
> 
>     An Nmtoken (name token) is any mixture of name characters.
> 
>     [Definition: A Name is an Nmtoken with a restricted set of initial
>     characters.]

I think you need to be more precise than that, e.g. point to the
production, or say,
      A name is an nmtoken that cannot begin with a digit, underscore
      or hyphen; the exact rules are defined in [link].

Otherwise I think it looks good.

Liam

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Received on Friday, 14 November 2008 16:39:45 UTC