RE: Draft #2 Transition Request: PER Request for XInclude 1.0 Second Edition

I tried to send the transition request for XInclude, 
but I realized there are too many things about the
top of the document at
http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/04/XInclude/REC-xinclude-20060423.html
that need fixing before I can do that.

1.  The status has to be changed to PER.  The date should be
    changed to 21 September 2006.

2.  The URL for the HTML has to have PER not REC in it; I suggest
http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/09/PER-xinclude-20060921/Overview.html
http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/09/PER-xinclude-20060921/PER-xinclude-2006092
1-review.html
http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/09/PER-xinclude-20060921/PER-xinclude-2006092
1.xml

3.  The errata link needs to be to a new document for 2nd Ed errata.

4.  The status section needs to be replaced with what I suggest
    below in my draft transition request except change "13 October"
    to "31 October".

Daniel, when do you think you'll be able to have this done?

Henry, do you think it's time to start trying to schedule
a PER call for sometime next week?

paul


> -----Original Message-----
> From: public-xml-core-wg-request@w3.org 
> [mailto:public-xml-core-wg-request@w3.org] On Behalf Of Grosso, Paul
> Sent: Wednesday, 2006 August 23 12:28
> To: public-xml-core-wg@w3.org
> Subject: Draft #2 Transition Request: PER Request for 
> XInclude 1.0 Second Edition
> 
> 
> 
> 
> Here is my updated draft PER requestion for XInclude 1.0 2nd Ed.
> 
> paul
> 
> ---------
> 
> Eventually-to: timbl@w3.org; steve@w3.org
> Eventually-cc: public-xml-core-wg@w3.org; webreq@w3.org; 
> chairs@w3.org;
> w3t-comm@w3.org
> 
> The XML Core WG requests publication of 
>   XML Inclusions (XInclude) Version 1.0 (Second Edition)
> available at
> http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/04/XInclude/REC-xinclude-20060423.html @@@
> as a Proposed Edited Recommendation (PER).  
> 
> The URL cited above is for the most recent Member-only 
> version of the specification as of DD MMM 2006 but   @@@
> dated DD MMM 2006 in anticipation of publication then. @@@
> 
> That file is set up to be published by moving it to
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/REC-xinclude-20060424/Overview.html @@@
> 
> The XInclude 1.0 First Edition was published on 20 December 2004 
> at http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-xinclude-20041220/
> as a Recommendation.  All changes to the document
> are recorded in the XInclude Errata document at
> http://www.w3.org/2004/12/xinclude-errata 
> A diff-marked review copy is available at
> http://www.w3.org/XML/2006/04/XInclude/REC-xinclude-20060423-r
> eview.html
> @@@
> 
> The WG's decision to request publication as a PER was taken 
> during a WG telcon on 2006 MMM DD whose minutes may be found at @@@
> @@@@
> 
> 
> SCHEDULE
> 
> We propose a publication date of 2006 MMM DD.   @@@
> 
> We propose that the PER period lasts from the date of publication
> until 13 October 2006.  
> 
> 
> PROPOSED CR TITLE, ABSTRACT AND STATUS SECTIONS
> 
> Abstract
> 
> This document specifies a processing model and syntax 
> for general purpose inclusion. Inclusion is accomplished 
> by merging a number of XML information sets into a single 
> composite infoset. Specification of the XML documents 
> (infosets) to be merged and control over the merging 
> process is expressed in XML-friendly syntax (elements, 
> attributes, URI references).
> 
> Status of this Document
> 
> [[The text here is what I suggest should be the status,
> except I don't show links, but most of this test including
> the links should be inferable from the existing XInclude
> status and/or the status for the XML 1.0 4th Ed draft PER--pbg]]
> 
> This section describes the status of this document at the time 
> of its publication. Other documents may supersede this document. 
> A list of current W3C publications and the latest revision of this 
> technical report can be found in the W3C technical reports index 
> at http://www.w3.org/TR/.
> 
> This document has been produced by the W3C XML Core Working 
> Group as part of the XML Activity. The English version of 
> this specification is the only normative version. However, 
> for translations of this document, see 
> http://www.w3.org/2003/03/Translations/byTechnology?technology
> =xinclude1
> 0.
> 
> This document is a Proposed Edited Recommendation of the W3C. 
> This second edition is not a new version of XInclude. As a 
> convenience 
> to readers, it incorporates the changes dictated by the accumulated 
> errata (available at http://www.w3.org/2004/12/xinclude-errata) 
> to the First Edition of XInclude 1.0, dated 20 December 2004. 
> 
> W3C Advisory Committee Members are invited to send formal review 
> comments to the W3C Team until 13 October 2006. Advisory Committee 
> Representatives should consult their WBS questionnaires. The 
> public is invited to send comments on this document to 
> www-xml-xinclude-comments@w3.org; public archives are available. 
> 
> The errata list for this edition is available at
> http://www.w3.org/2004/12/xinclude-errata.
> 
> Known implementations are documented in the XInclude Implementation 
> Report. A Test Suite is maintained to help in assessing conformance 
> to this specification.
> 
> Publication as a Proposed Edited Recommendation does not imply 
> endorsement by the W3C Membership. This is a draft document 
> and may be updated, replaced or obsoleted by other documents 
> at any time. It is inappropriate to cite this document as other 
> than work in progress.
> 
> This document has been produced under the 24 January 2002 CPP 
> as amended by the W3C Patent Policy Transition Procedure. 
> An individual who has actual knowledge of a patent which the 
> individual believes contains Essential Claim(s) with respect 
> to this specification should disclose the information in 
> accordance with section 6 of the W3C Patent Policy. Documentation 
> of intellectual property possibly relevant to this specification 
> may be found at the Working Group's public IPR disclosure page.
> 
> 
> Paul Grosso and Norman Walsh, chairs of the XML Core WG. 
>

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