Re: Transition Request: PER Request for Namespaces in XML 1.1 Second Edition

Dear Richard,

One substantial comment and some minor comments I came across while 
reading the PER will follow.

Konrad

1. In section 6.1 it may be helpful for readers if the two words 
"Undeclaring prefixes" plus a line break would be inserted in bold 
before the line
 - The attribute value in a default namespace declaration /MAY/ be 
empty. ...
and also if this would carry an id="undeclPrefix" (or similar) so it can 
be referred to easier, as this is a substantial feature/concept of 
Namespaces in XML 1.1

2.
... identified by an IRI 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/PER-xml-names11-20060614/Overview.html#> I, 
the *namespace name* is I.
... identified by an IRI 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/PER-xml-names11-20060614/Overview.html#> J, 
the *namespace name* is J.

changing the I to J will make it more readable as the italics I looks 
like a slash in the document

3. same sententce: IRI 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/PER-xml-names11-20060614/Overview.html#> does 
not link 
http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/PER-xml-names11-20060614/Overview.html#IRIRef

4. section 2.3 and 3,
     ... IRI reference is the normalized value 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#AVNormalize> of the attribute ...
     ... The attribute's normalized 
<http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#AVNormalize> value MUST be either an IRI 
reference ...

    - maybe change http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#AVNormalize to  
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#AVNormalize

5. some more links used throughout the document that might need to be 
changed from XML 1.0 to 1.1

http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-S  to http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-S
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#dt-default to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#dt-default
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-Attribute to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-Attribute
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-Eq to http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-Eq
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-AttValue to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-AttValue
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#dt-content to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#dt-content
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#dt-docent to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#dt-docent
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#dt-doctype to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#dt-doctype
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-ExternalID to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-ExternalID
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-markupdecl to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-markupdecl
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-PEReference to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-PEReference
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-contentspec to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-contentspec
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-choice to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-choice
http://www.w3.org/TR/REC-xml#NT-DefaultDecl to 
http://www.w3.org/TR/xml11/#NT-DefaultDecl

maybe  you want to use xml:base to solve this ;-)

Grosso, Paul schrieb:
> [...]
> http://www.w3.org/TR/2006/PER-xml-names11-20060614/Overview.html
> [...]
>   

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