My slightly comments

My comments to the lastest version in repo [1]:
1.3 Namespaces - in the table there is 'bob' which isn't use in spec. It 
can be removed.

3.1 Authentication Sequence - point 5  - "The returned representation is 
then transformed into an RDF graph as specified in Processing the WebID 
Profile". I think it would be worth to add reference to RDF spec (what 
does RDF graph mean) [2]

3.1 Authentication Sequence - point 5  - "That graph is then queried as 
explained in Querying the Graph. If the query is answered positively, 
then that WebID is verified." - also add reference to SPARQL (what does 
querying the graph mean) [3]

3.1 Authentication Sequence - point 5  - "That graph is then queried as 
explained in Querying the Graph. If the query is answered positively, 
then that WebID is verified." - link "Querying the Graph" is broken.

C.2 Informative references - I think [RDF-CONCEPTS] and 
[RDF-SPARQL-QUERY] have the same status. So why [RDF-CONCEPTS] is 
informative?

Best regards,
Dominik 'domel' Tomaszuk


[1] http://dvcs.w3.org/hg/WebID/raw-file/6da4ac1999d6/spec/index-respec.html
[2] http://www.w3.org/TR/2004/REC-rdf-concepts-20040210/
[3] http://www.w3.org/TR/2008/REC-rdf-sparql-query-20080115/

Received on Tuesday, 10 January 2012 13:59:47 UTC